In reply to Terrorbyte TC,
Very sorry about the grammar mistakes, i have to learn to be more careful when typing.
I see what you mean on the errors. I'll get right on it.
Again really sorry. Thanks for pointing that out.
IYFAPA

Well, same person has the first two reviews, but hey, whatever right? Another good chapter, but I'm noticing grammatical errors and missing words. Make sure you re-read you work before posting it. I find the spell checker in the document manager to be very helpful.
Keep it up.

I'm liking it. Nice to see someone go back to the original, in the midst of all the new stuff. no trouble with the accent, as I know that particular sequence in the game like the back of my hand. Worry more about layout mistakes. I only saw one, but it was pretty obvious and really shouldn't have been there.
Keep it up, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.