Ha-Ha! The part when Dende and Mr. Popo are carrying Piccolo's thrown was hilarious!

that screwed up my mind for life

okay, I love your fics and all, but here's a list of things I like about your fics and what I don't like.
WHAT I LIKE:
1)It's a piccy ficcy. Anything that has to do with piccolo and has humor in it automatically has my attention.
2)It's hilarious
WHAT I DON'T LIKE:
1) Vegeta is gay. I hate anything that makes one of my favorite characters gay, so why do I continue to read your fics? Because they're funny.
2)You use too many japanese words. Some of us don't know a lot about japanese.
3)Goku is stupider than he really is.
4) Veggie and Goku germs? That's just plain odd...
5) The fusions exist. HOW THE HELL DID THAT HAPPEN! the fusions ARE goku and vegeta!
This is not a flame. I repeat, this is NOT a flame.

Well-done! I laughed out loud! Piccolo is such a crackhead in your fics-I luv it!

What I appreciate most about this fic, and the others of yours that I have read, is that it is abundant in both quantity and quality. Your knack for comedy is impeccable, and you are always creative with each fic, making new ways for the characters to be zanier than ever.

It's about time that I add you to my Favorite Authors list!

Arale:(grins) Wow!, That was a great story! (giggles) Geez, I laughed so hard I started coughing! (considering I have a nasty cold, but not as bad as my sibling) But anyway, I love the part when Piccolo found out that they would even stupider till they are dead. I can see his face when finds out about stuff. Goku and Vegeta too. (grins Goku-style)

Vegeta:(smiles some) yes, that was a pretty good fanfic.

Arale:(smiles) I had a weird thought the other day. I dreamed you and Goku were dancing along to the "Chicken Dance", doing the same moves!(falls back laughing hysically, then coughs loudly.)

Vegeta:(turns slightly green) Ugh, that would be scary. (turns to Arale, who sat up) How do you get these strange dreams? (answered only to coughing)

Arale:(coughing loudly)

Vegeta: Eew.

Arale:(rolls her eyes, then waves) Toodles!

Vegeta:you really like that word don't you?

Arale:Yup!

Vegeta:(groans)

*pouts* I don't even get Independence Day! I'm sitting here listening to Staind and staring out the window at the RAIN which never STOPS despite it being the BONFIRE PARTY tonight! GRRRRRRRRR! I HATE BEING ENGLISH!

I LOVED IT! GO, PICCOLO, GO! As for Fan Fic Idea No. 5, it sounds crazy, but the time travel thing's cool. Maybe NOT have Veggie win in the future...Perhaps maybe some other person win over them BOTH! Have them under his/her thumb and have Goku as his pet dog and Veggie as the slave...I don't know, but I hope you figure it out!

Do something shounen-ai-ish and I'll give you money! Pweese?

LoL Nice fic..-Snorts.- I nearly fell out of my chair at the "butt-flies" part..lol..-Glomps Chu..smiles at her as sweetly as he can given that he's a chibi demon ouji.- Pleeeaase let Vegeta win? Just this once? And would a twinge of shounen ai be that bad? I mean you get right ON the border line of it in all your other fics. I've been a faithful reader and reviewer of your fics for so long, please Chu sama just once, indulge me? Onegai?

Heeeeeeey, Chuey! Grrreat fic! Hi, Pikki-kun! I love you!

Hi, Veggie! You're like the big brother I never had! Hi Goku! You're so kawaii! Keep it up, Chu-san!

I ABSOFRIKKINLUTELY LOVED this fic, 'specially since P-sama is my favorite character! The characterizations were awesome, and the whole thing had me laughing so hard that I almost fell off of my chair and my parents kept giving me funny looks from the other room.

As for fanfic ideas, my vote is with number three, since you've never done a fic with Videl really in it before, and... well, veggie and son-san as supervillains! Woohoo! Oh yeah, there's a humour doujinshi out there called Super Saiyaman that involves Veggie getting jealous of Gohan's whole superhero thing, so he gets Bulma to sew him up a cape, rounds up Goku and Mirai, and makes his own team to rival Gohans. You should check it out, It's really funny _

Okeydoke, to round off this super-long review, I love your fanfics, you're one of my favorite authors, and I hereby dub you some sort of demented genius. *dubs her the demented genius with special dubbing sword-type-thing* ...There, all done!

Well, I think some of us wouldn't mind a bit of shounen ai... ::cough:: But, hey, it is your story. It would be interesting though, to see how it would turn out if Vejjie won, even though he never does, which is a rule in many authors' fanfic guidelines. Maybe you could change the premise a bit so that we could see what would happen if he did win. Personally, I like the 1st idea the best. Poor Goten and Gohan... Maybe they could some advice on being illegitimate from Trunks (and possibly Bura, seeing as how no one is really sure if Vejjie and Bulmies ever tied the knot). Keep up the funny stuff, Chuquita! _

LOL! Great fic. Hmmm, I think I like idea 1 and 3 about the same. Idea no. 5 sounds interesting... Umm, I wouldn't really worry about shounen ai... actually to me your fics always seem to imply it between the two. _;

LOL! Very funny! I like your Piccolo-tries-to-take-over-the-world stories and I'd love to see more "Piccy ficcies"! It would have been funny to see Vegeta end up as Piccolo's slave though ... maybe next time ... :)

A nice change from your usual Vegeta fics (though I do love them), you should do more with Piccolo )