|Reviews for Apocalypse Now 3: Crusaders of The Cataclysm|
| 3 4/17/13 . chapter 8
Kururu's not exactly out of character, but he sure acts a lot more like a jerk here than he tends to on the show. XD
| ZanyAnimeGirl 4/15/13 . chapter 8
That it...-de chi!
*insert sad face here*
| ccwrite 1/4/13 . chapter 7
Ha! PMS was an intended pun, am I correct?
| ZanyAnimeGirl 1/4/13 . chapter 7
I'm soooo haaappppppyyyy!-de chi!
Weep weep sobs sobs
| garnet750 1/4/13 . chapter 6
Another review for your story! :D
The chapter's great (because of this Momoka instantly became my 3rd favorite character in Sergeant Frog) and about Momoka having two souls, I just realized it too at the end of the chapter :p (I thought that Dark Momoka was Momoka's inner personality, so wasn't it just a disorder? I don't know, not an expert at that -_-")
Oh, and if you haven't realized, you typed Momoka as Momomka at the end (but it doesn't really matter anyway, people know that its Momoka).
| ZanyAnimeGirl 1/3/13 . chapter 6
Dos vodanios!-de chi!
| ccwrite 1/3/13 . chapter 6
Giroro sounded like a pro. Nice action there!
| ccwrite 12/25/12 . chapter 5
Thanks. Merry Christmas to you too.
| ccwrite 12/15/12 . chapter 4
This chapter feels ... a bit rushed. I know this is supposed to be sad but for some reason it didn't evoke much emotion to me. -_-"' (that awkward moment when you know that you are supposed to feel sad but don't). I am not particularly crazy about sensory imageries since this is FF but I am a big fan for descriptive emotions (they are very, very hard). Your writing is better than the majority of the Keroro stories (better than mine too, as a matter of facts), but for some reason I don't feel the same passion, the same excitement as in the first two Apocalypse Now. Well, none of us are professional writers here, so I shouldn't have such high expectations -_-, writing is just a hobby for us. But I believe that you, as a FF writer, do care about how your readers think since you've definitely spent time editing and revising your stories, and that I, as frank as I am whether in real life or on the Internet, should tell you what I think. I hope that I do not come across as being harsh, and I apologize that I didn't really offer a real advice but merely gave you my opinion. Again, this is my personal opinion and others may have felt differently toward this story, and yes, I will continue to read this story anyway. Happy writing!
| adventuremaker16 12/9/12 . chapter 3
| ZanyAnimeGirl 12/9/12 . chapter 3
:( nooooooo!-de chi! Write now!-de chi!
| ccwrite 12/9/12 . chapter 3
You're doing great, please continue. Fuyuki is going to be sad, :(
Is Momoka the only death or there will be more? I can't wait to see how this will progress.
| ccwrite 11/20/12 . chapter 2
How exciting! I wonder how they will manage to escape this time.
| adventuremaker16 11/9/12 . chapter 1
It is time to meet the legendary super saiyan, Broly.