"No, that sounded like a bad movie."

Hahahahahahahaha
You're a genius.

Wonderful! I love seeing Brody and Carrie's relationship from an outside perspective.

Seriously, I am totaly amazed by what you have writed, this is definitly different from usual carrie/brody fanfiction
but it is really really really wonderful ! It is so well written that it could have been like I was seeing a episode of Homeland, really I'm speechless ( well, obviously this is an expression because I have never writed a review this long before ) !
Maybe this is because of your studies ( that I encourage you into by the way , I'm impressed, studing phylo, literature and communication seems very interesting and difficult !) or it is natural but I think that you are one of the most tallented writer that I have seen ! ( fanfiction writer of course, compare you to Maupassant would be a little exagerate )

This is just getting better and better. Seriously, bravo. I like that you don't demonise Jessica, you just write her as a regular flawed person. I'm also glad you didn't write 'fin' ;)

Well, i am glad that you didn't write "fin" ;-), i really would like to see net chapter...
I like that She told someone about what she saw, and now i wondered whats they will discover...

Nope, doesn't feel like an ending to me. Need another chapteeeeeer ! This one was great as well :). I ship Jess/Mike all the way. Can't wait to know what's gonna happen next.

Awesome,really well written.I am looking forward for a next chapter

Wooow. That was a really interesting perspective. I love the last line, it really made me curious about what the aftermath of this chapter would look like. Really awesome fic, definitely following. (:

Well if you wrote this in class, congrats, cause it's definitely one of my favorite stories among all the ones you wrote.
I'd definitely be interested in another chapter :D
Great job again - as always :)

YOUR A GENIUS ! you've done this in class ! It can't be this is too perfect
I really thing you got perfectly into Jessica's head ! It's really a amazing fanfic, there something so soft, warm and sweet about it ! I LOVE IT !
ps : just to know what kind of class do you have ?

More! Please!

I am I am Iam One more chapter please

Thanks for this story, i am at work, so i will read this properly at home, but i want thank you for new story ;-)...