great fic ! it's nice to see a fanfic on raiden and his family because they really are good for him, he deserves his happiness through them and can go on living, we need more of this ).
I hope you'll do a multi-chap fic one day !

Your first Metal Gear fic? sir you write like a natural. The story just flowed well and was a joy to read. Truly great work at pre-Rising Revengeance Raiden with Little John.

This was amazing! You really made the park sound beautiful! Plus there's not enough Raiden and John story's so i was really happy to find one! XD

This is a rather touching one shot. something I feel we need more of here.

Awwww; that was so SWEET. I kinda saw a bit of the pouncing lesson from the Lion King movie.-Peace Out! ;)

Wow, that was just amazing! You transformed a battle machine into a loving human father...many authors struggle with that's but you made it look so easy!

Hope to see more of Raiden soon...Keep up the good work Rose!