I finally got over here to review! And I'm glad I did! This chapter was good too. I think Starlet's feelings are very real and I like the way you captured them. And Lance is so patient, such a good friend to her. I like him a lot!

I quite like this...the fight between Starlet and Sara is well done. I liked your rich descriptions of the two.

Ra'akone

Sorry it took me so long to get out here and read chapter 2! I loved how you wrote the healing scene. That was beautiful. All the colors made me think of Melanie Rawn's sunrunners, for some reason. Great job!

Awesome story! I wanna hear more!

Wow - a brilliant description of healing in action - much better than the usual 'he cast a cura'!

And I'm glad Delaz isn't too angry. Looking forward to more.

Ok, I "reviewed" this before, but not here for everyone to see...I liked this chapter, especially the rich description of the healing proccess!

And yes, "Phoenix" is fitting!

Ra'akone

This is an interesting story also...can't wait for next chapter. Interesting when I read these stories about parts of the "history" that seem to be given only a faint mention. Good stuff!

Ra'akone

You've got me curious! Her mother is half-mage? And it's FF6? Hmm...Terra? It's a cool start to what I'm sure will be a great story. I loved how you captured her feelings, especially at the beginning. Continue! It's great!

Interesting beginning, sympathetic characters, believable situation. A bit short, maybe, but it just leaves me with an appitite for more!