awesome story

y u stp writing?

it's GOOD... it's not great, but it's the best goddamn let's player fanfic i've read. it's not paced very well, descriptive or long enough but you can fix that.

Me: I want Ammy in the next Super Smash Bros. game

Issun: Someone is a big fan.

Waka: I'll say. But ZS15 thinks I'm hotter then you

Issun: What did you say, you half-baked prophet

Oki: Will you two stop messing around, she thinks I'm the hottest

Waka: I'm the hottest

Issun: No, Me

Oki: No, me

Ammy and Sakuya: BOYS! Do we really need to get you know who.

Oki: *turns into a wolf* *wimpers*

this story combines two of my favorite things chuggaaconroy's commentary and fanfiction

Wow, I can't believe Jon and Arin are in this story, and that Ammy was nicknamed 'whitey'. Though, Emile's right, Chibi had it worse(*cough*porkchop*cough*dude*cough*). Good story so far, looking forward to what happens next...

Gasp, she can talk[Also I love the art direction in the games as well] :O

Emile likes coffee? Wow, I had no idea... Anyways, this is looking pretty good so far, I'm gonna keep reading this :D

Ib? You've played Ib? That game scared the bologna out of me! Of course, the storyline was pretty good. I really liked Gary. Anyways, this chapter was good, keep it up!

Yay! New chappy! :D
Continue! Continue! Continue!
I'm looking forward to the battle.

I usually consider a dungeon as a fairly large arena, with a decent amount of puzzles, a key item/ability, and a boss.

But of course, that's just me. Plus, I drank orange juice that was expired for 5 months. Why are you even listening to me? I don't know if orange juice scrambles your brain when expired, but better SAVE than sorry! (See what I did there? With Issun...Okamiden...*shot*)

But anyway, you're doing great, and glad too see you're not dead! See ya next chapter!

At first I was like "Why the heck would Chugga get the beta copy of Okami 3?", but then I remembered that the Guys were contacted by Nintendo to promote New Super Mario Bros 2.

Continue this plz

I really hope you continue this. I know this is only the first chapter, and I'm going to read more, but please continue.

I have an idea for an imp.
False Amaterasu
They look like copies of Ammy, but made out of watery semi transparent ink.
Also you never said what divine instrument Ammy was using.

Ah, another great chapter!