Aww this was really sweet. Great job.

Aww this was very sweet and really beautiful. Amazing job.

"… what are we then?"
A lot of people is trying to get an anwer, Ziva.

Loved this story. Hope you write more.

Aww, sweet :)

I can't believe what those guys said. I'm glad Tony was the one to hold her, she deserves better than what she's had.

I don't think anyone will mind that you added a second chapter, but it might be a good idea to go back and remove "The End" from the bottom of chapter 1. It was cute, though.

well that was not very nice, was hoping for more chapters, still Tony and Ziva are together. good story

Love it! More please? What happens when they get home?

Perfect! That's definitely a great way to end it! You could make it into a several chapter story and ill read, however you've added that great finishing touch if you intend on leaving it here!
Hope to read more cute stories like this in the future :)

Awwww this is cute! I love Tiva fluffs-you only really get Tiva smut these days :( do this was a nice change!

-Livy xoxo

Awww really sweet :)

Please continue this!

great story wished it was a bit longer wonderful writing.

That was a great scene. If only the show's writers would take a hint... :) Loved it.