Very hard to read as one long paragraph here. I'm sure it's just the site formatting but still.

Whatever happened to people using paragraphs?

I regret to say i could not read this. The idea looks interesting, but without paragraphs or chapters, i simply lose focus. If you cleared up the lay-out it could be really good.

Hey man the storys all together like a big paragraph. Its easier to read when its in paragraphs instead.