|Reviews for Bullshit World War Z story Don't read if you know what's good for you|
| Spazz 4/3/13 . chapter 1
Very hard to read as one long paragraph here. I'm sure it's just the site formatting but still.
| glocke12 11/23/12 . chapter 1
Whatever happened to people using paragraphs?
| Thomas 11/21/12 . chapter 1
I regret to say i could not read this. The idea looks interesting, but without paragraphs or chapters, i simply lose focus. If you cleared up the lay-out it could be really good.
| gotham knight jon 11/13/12 . chapter 1
Hey man the storys all together like a big paragraph. Its easier to read when its in paragraphs instead.