| Reviews for Prom Dates and Birthday Cakes |
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speedmetal 4/11/13 . chapter 29 Please make a third story, or even a oneshot about their wedding or even if she gets bit by Barnabas! So please make another story -Speedmetal (this is my real account im just lazy to log in) |
Kerryna 1/11/13 . chapter 29Awwwww, this story was adorable! I really enjoyed the first story, and this was just so sweet :) Fantastic job! |
MyColorlessRainbowVeins 1/4/13 . chapter 1That was a very good story, as was the first one. 8) Can you perhaps notify me in some way if/once you get around to making the next edition? |
BlooperLover 1/4/13 . chapter 29That was a lovely ending! At the beginning of the prom chapter when Tyler said, "This is it. The night I've been waiting for ever since my first day of high school." I was so excited! I was like "This is it. The chapter I've been waiting for since I read the summary." Those were a great couple of chapters and I'm quite sad this story is ending. Seeing as this is already the second story, I'm guessing there will be no more right? If there is, can you PM when it comes out? |
mariangisborne 1/4/13 . chapter 29OMG, love the ending, I almost cried myself. so pretty. Keep up the good work. Mariangisborne |
mariangisborne 1/4/13 . chapter 27Woah, you are on fire today, a perfect relationship argument which always result in people kissing each other. Anyway loving this story, can't wait for the next chapters. Mariangisborne. |
BlooperLover 1/4/13 . chapter 25I loved this chapter! I like that part with the gold dress! I anxiously await your next update! |
Jim-JamGurl 1/1/13 . chapter 24When Barnabas said the appointment was for him and Tyler, I couldn't help but picture him in a dress! Needless to say I almost died from laughing to much... |
AngeliqueBouchard1972 1/1/13 . chapter 24This is a good story, and you have a lot of potential as an author. But something about Barnbas and Tyler is just hilarious to me and I can never take them seriously. It might be that I simply can't imagine Barnabas doing any of that, and it seems to greatly distract me from the story. Which is all a good time, because every time I read I burst out laughing. But is that what you want from the story? Or do youu want it to be consider an actual romance and not comedy? Please message me.(Please don't consider this a hate comment, I love your work and only want to help you improve...) |
BlooperLover 1/1/13 . chapter 24Well this should be interesting! If Barnabas does take her to prom I'd like to see all of those guys reactions! I anxiously await your next update! |
Angelique 12/30/12 . chapter 23 I really think that you are a talented writer and love your work though I feel that it could improve in some aspects. Sometimes OC charecters can be played out perfectly and make lots of sense, though this novel I find a bit unrealistic. I find the rekationship between Barnabas and the OC charecter(s). I would love to see more of your work, possibly something non OC for dark shadows? Please don |
BlooperLover 12/29/12 . chapter 22I can't wait to find out Barnabus' plan for Tyler's birthday! I anxiously await your next update! |
BlooperLover 12/29/12 . chapter 21Awwww! Nice chapter! I'm quite happy now. I anxiously await your next update! |
The Joker Lover 12/27/12 . chapter 20Please update soon |
Jim-JamGurl 12/26/12 . chapter 20Another great chapter! I'm already anxious for the next chappy! |