an interesting start, and quite faithful to the game. I quite like the snarky, sarcastic writing style you have going here. it would be funny if it turned out that Snide was narrating.

Personally I thought there were a few too many references to fanfiction, and they don't really add to the story.

Keep going, I'm looking forward to when DK rescues Diddy and Tiny.

Good job, Xan! Can't wait to read more! w