This story is already leading to an even better one. Chapter length is perfect actually. im adding this story. :D

i love your story so much! is she gonna get paired up with mark? (please make it). also, i cant wait for you to update. im curious on what mark and michelle will say when they get back, or if only sophie will return o_O. please update soon!

Is it bad that I was chanting for MarkXSophie..? XD Damn me and my pairings; (Mark is my second favorite character o3o)

Hey, not a bad start. Going to wait for the next chapter.

That's a very nice first chapter for your first beginning.

Sophia is such a cutie how can't you not love her shyness?
The only thing bothered me here was you didn't give the characters describtions like how do they look or what do they were where and etc.

Please update soon This story had potentional! I just know it :D