This is my first FF review in a whole lot haha.

Awww you should've let them go together I finished the game with both of them only to get a romantic ending but nothing . so I understand how you feel.

Damn Jessica.

As a year-long fan of Hawk/Lise (one of my oldest shippings in fact), I just rushed on your story as soon as I read the summary XD You pictured their relationship as I always did : two close hearts, but far from each others in many ways...the kind of beautiful yet sad and impossible romance we are all fond of :P
Anyway, really touching and beautiful. Each character's personnality and mind was perfectly written, you really did your best at sticking to their traits. Congratulations and keep on with the good work!