Love the story wish u'd continue

Please update your story. ):

Please keep writing its really good

Hey! I really really really like it, so I thought, maybe you could 'make' loren tell jake she doesn't wannt Lia around anymore, and then her brother is upset with lia, and lia and chloe are going to 'work' together on ruining the relationship between Eddie and Loren, but don't break them up because they're too cute together. haha, but it's an amazing story, really!

You are very good writer. i like the way you write and i hope that it will be more chapters

write more leddie scenes if thats possible.

i want to keep reading but there is nothing to read anymore

Write about how lia dose a very messy thing but Loren and eddie gets through this and Jeremy falls in love with mel but she is taken but Ian and adom broke up with her please write more so shocked

have eddie go off on leah telling her that he doesn't love her and that he will never ever be with her and have a make out session with loren right in front of leah

when is chapter 28 coming?
i really love reading this !

Omg you should do the next one when Loren and Kia fight and Loren win

Loren and Eddie could have a kid…even though they're not married.

I like your story and everything u did. I thnk u should start making Leah coping Loren with everything including what she did to become the rising popstar and Loren will get mad for what Leah is doing. Then bring Chloe into helping Loren out and minding her bussniss with everything she is going to do (this is the way for Loren to forgiving Chloe for what has happened and to give her a second chance). Mel,Loren,Aid,Chloe will be friends and start hanging out, so that will be my story that I would write but I really want you to take it and conbine your idea too cause I can't write and trust me I SUCK soooo bad and I want u to write it please! Thx

A little idea is to write about ian and the ''friend'' he is going to see. And maybe you can write about Phil and Adriana and her practency. And about Mel and her job. And maybe it's a idea that Lia is going to steal things from Eddie and let it look like Loren did it. Or about Osborne Silver and the Grease movie he want to make and he calls Eddie because Eddie promised to do the film with Loren and then Lia shows up when they are shooting the movie. then lia is messing things up so Loren is going to fail at the scene and Lia is saying that she could do it. And maybe you could bring Tayler back in the picture. He could mess things up between Eddie and Loren and try to get Loren to sleep with him so he can hurt Eddie with it. And about Mel who spends some time with Eddie, Loren and Ian and that she and Ian growe closer. and afcourse about the Concert of Eddie and Loren and how it goes with Jeremy and Lia and there first performance, you could write that Lia after her performance ran into Eddie and kissed him in front of all the people who are at the concert and all the press makes pictures and everbody thinks that Eddie goes with somebody else. and maybe that chloe tries to het Tyles back but she found out tyles tries to hook up with Loren. this are just a few ideas some are not the best but maybe you get inspiration of it.

Ps: Sorry if my English not the best is, i'm not from England/America

I love you story soo much !