Your idea of a journal format is pretty good. I really enjoyed reading your work. Can't wait for more!

LOL, this is so cute Fidget. I love the part where Dot makes that little entry while she's drunk. And the drinking contest with Mouse, lol, this is great. Please continue this. :)

Hey, the system restart is on my birthday! Eee!

Go, Dot! Get some Bob-action!

Although, this journal thing begs the question: Is Dot a pervy Bob fancier?

Yes, I adored this when I beta-read it, and I still adore it. Truly, you are a fantabulous writer, my child. I eagerly look forward to another installment. Ah, dear, dear Dot...who wouldn't want to read about HER?

*Giggle* Good!! Pls write more!!

Awwww this is great Fidget!!! And just the way you'd expect Dot to react. LOL I love the thought of Dot with a hangover. Poor girl.

*chortle* This is really good. I especially love the hangover part. I wonder if drunk portalling is more or less dangerous than drunk driving?
Hee hee! I can just see Dot's rising panic as she's going over the frightening aspects of the party. Drinking contest with Mouse... katanas... scaaaaary...

Hehe that's cute. :) Continue it, it's interesting and it puts Dot in character pretty well--always business-like but will totally gush over Bob. XD Yeah, pretty good. ^^ ~MJ