|Reviews for Moving On|
| Icey.summer02 12/11/12 . chapter 6
Whoops! Sorry about that, I'm having issues writting on my phone keypad...:P
Anyway I was going to say that at the end of the day, (as everyone KEEPS telling me!) exams don't mean everything... Even if it doesn't feel that way... and I think you're making a wise decision:)
I don't really have anything else to say, well thats a lie, I could bitch and moan for ever and a day about school and exams and pressure, but I have nothing else that you would actally want to read left to say ! Other that good luck and it won't last forever(hopefully!) x
Love, Katherine xx
| icey.summer02 12/11/12 . chapter 6
Ah, I understand so much! I'm presuming your in year 11 as well and it's just horrible isn't it?! X guess why my updates are so horribly speradic?! ... :(
But good luck in your exams and mocks (finished 4 intensive and brutal days today of them...:() and as every
| icey.summer02 12/5/12 . chapter 5
Aww, I love how you've pieced it all together-vines hair, bollo being a familia and with them and also the general idea of the move is really good:)
I also like how vince got protective when bollo couldn't come! X
| GrowlyNoir 12/5/12 . chapter 5
-He got up and hugged Naboo tightly, ignoring his squirming.- GRIN!
Apart from doubts about his hair, Vince is happy now. He's still got his "family."
| icey.summer02 11/27/12 . chapter 4
Aww, thats sweet:) I love hOw Howard is being all helpful but still respectful toward vince:) and vince's parting with the animals was really well written:)
| GrowlyNoir 11/27/12 . chapter 4
-He was being uncommonly… well, sweet.-
He's your Keeper, Vince. He needs you too.
-They all jumped up for one last cuddle-
I'm glad they got to say goodbye, sad as it was.
| GrowlyNoir 11/19/12 . chapter 3
-"It'll be fine. They won't hurt you if I tell 'em not to."-
This is my favourite line. I'm glad Vince has forgiven Howard. They need each other.
I also loved the Bollo effect. Hope you feel better soon. x
| icey.summer02 11/19/12 . chapter 3
Yay such a lovely chapter, if a little sad... I liked how vince was really possessive over the animals and how he took control! :) also the animals are fun;)
I have had a shit day and this managed to make me smile before I go to sleep...:)
| icey.summer02 11/14/12 . chapter 2
Wow how did I miss this?!
Aww that was so nice;) I would love to pin point a particular bit but the whOle thing was good so I can't...;)
Keep going:) dark isn't always bad;). ...
| GrowlyNoir 11/12/12 . chapter 2
-Vince sat down in his lap and let the hairy arms engulf him.-
Naboo's right. There WILL be trouble. This Bollo scene is lovely.
-And anyway, who knew how Vince worked? If he worked like a human at all?-
This is a brilliant sentence. Howard's being kind & practical, despite Vince being a little mean. But it is understandable in the circumstances.
-Charlie didn't come.- This is so sad.
If you've got an IT chapter, well yeah, post it. x
| icey.summer02 11/12/12 . chapter 1
Yay! New story!
And it lOoks good! It almost looks as iff it may turn a bit angsty/dark?
I love how you portrayed the animals! Especially the monkeys and the start with bainbridge made me giggle! X
Love Icey x
| GrowlyNoir 11/11/12 . chapter 1
-"Did you just drop mango in my hair? Urgh, it'll be all sticky!"-
I loved the bit with the lemurs. And with Naboo at the end. Look forward to next.