I have absolutely loved this story! I love TH as Freddie. Brillant story love!

I squealed when I got the notification that you've updated! Haha, but it was a false alarm ;).. However, thank you for letting us know, it means a lot. I love all of your Tom Hardy stories, they are marvelous, so I will be patient and wait for you to get spare time to write and update your stories. Until then, I hope you do well with your exams, good luck and study hard, that's more important :)

are you going to be updating soon, i keep checking to see if you have but nothing! i really hope you do, i want to find out whats going to happen!
thank you

I think its really well written. The story is rivoting and easy to follow. And Freddie- I almost have a crush on him! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Promise everyone there will be an update soon, I know some of you are anxiously awaiting :) Promise! xoxo

Will there be an update soon I'm getting withdrawal symptoms! :)

Woaw, your story is really good! This might be embarrassing, but I was crying and my heart ached for these two younglings when reading the last couple of chapters. You did an incredible job with Alyson, she is real. Her love to Freddie and his way of loving her back is written beautifully through their actions and appearances. I am so happy that I found your story, and now I am waiting eagerly for an update!

Oh, this is really sad and waste of life :/.. An escape if reality.. Funny how Freddie tried to"stop" her

Poor thing, she just cant refuse him. I liked her cleanung up, I would probably do it too if it was me. Cant stand when it is too messy..

Oh my, she had a wild night and then a day of realisation. Love it

The last thing he said was beautiful. Though, I am so scared for her., Freddie he shows his human side to her, but still...

Wow, who wouldnt have given him a kiss there? However, Alyson must be careful :-/

Oh, I never thought that I could find a fanfiction story for The Take. Glad that I find one, and more happy that it is really good one! Freddie is very well kept in character, the slap in the end was cruel but necessary to illustrate his violent tendencies.

Awesome chapter i love this story please update soon!

Awesome chapter good for alyson dont let him go! Go for urs girl!