That's it?

Lol yeah I guess your right xD took me two weeks to read up to the current chapter...

Good writing!

Mostly I don't like open endings, but this one I do like, Because you kinda know what's going to happend, they'll solve the case, annoy Lassie and eat pineapples and jerked chicken :P
Haha, well we love you too in a non-awkward reader-writer way xd I always love it when writers respond to my reviews, I've been enjoying our chat :P too bad it's over now. Thank you (: . I'll just follow your next story
I'll be leaving for Rome tonight with my school :P It's goin to be awesome. So if you start with a new story, I believe that there's wifi there so I can read it. Goodluck with your finals!
And again, really really love this story :D
Greetings from Holland, the place with the wooden shoes, drugs, molens, dyks and cheese :D

Awwwwwww! So soon?

Well I knew it wouldn't last forever, but I wish it could have :/ or at least maybe it could have lasted until the truth or dare game lol!

plz update sometime if you can though! I loved the story :]

Nice.

Nice

Nice. Also, just wondering do you actually know of someone named Aloe? I have never heard of that as someones name.

Thats good! I like it! Don't listen to that other guy, he should shut up! your story rules and I think you are doing good :3 looking for some shawnXlassie bonding X3

Bring it on!

Lolol.. "Give me a hug Gus!"... "Ouch! Are you trying to break my ribs?" "Again."

love, love, lovie dovie this chapter! :D I agree with Belle, shawn would so try to take off his bandages! Lol have him do it again X3

Oh and is Aloe bulimic? That would be gross but sweet like she stops doing it for Shawn? I dunno! It sounds cool, but then, I've been bulimic, and I hated doing it. my fingers constantly smelled bad :/

Anyways, off the gross topic, LOVED LE CHAPTER! Gimme more, gimme more! :D

Love the chapter (: and of course would shawn try to take off his bandages xd that's so him. I like it when he's on his meds, he's so funny. Like that time when his appendix burst in the real series.
Dutch isn't that hard when you're a native speaker. Although I get better grades in English than in Dutch at school xd there're a lot of rules for grammer. And they're really annoying xd our pronounciation of words are pretty difficult to learn too, we pronounce the "G" like you're trying to clear your throat, so our language sounds a bit ugly I think (: I'd love to learn Spanish, but we only get French and German in school, I dropped French because it's a difficult language. German is a bit easier so (: Maybe I'll follow a course sometime for Spanish.
You went to Tokyo? That's awesome, I'd love to go there some day.

I just finished your story (at least I assumed it was the end) and was not as impressed as I have been with other fanfictions. The character, Aloe, is really original, but perhaps too original. Shawn and Lassiter would never be on first name terms, either. Opium? Isn't that really, really rare? There are loads of errors inside the writing, and why is this whole story about Aloe getting in trouble? And Shawn's crash? Not very realistic. I have been in crashes, and they take much longer to get ambulances there.

Well, for all the problems, I guess it is alright all in all. Your writing style, to say the least, is a lot like the show.

But if you do update, please include a little Shawn-Juliet. I noticed you've been throwing her in and pulling her out of the story like a ragdoll.

-A Reader (TGIF)

Love this chapter! Love this story! Please update soon, and I'd love some Shawn-and Sister bonding! Oh, and Lassie funz! Maybe Shawn and Lassie relate? I'm big on slash, but you don't have to do that...

Awhhh! Do you even know how much my heart broke for Aloe? It shattered. I need an update, I love Aloe and the whole carwreck thing! Please, please have more goosh! Im gonna die :D I love, love, love, this story! Please update! :3

I could totally see that chickenpart happening xd This chapter is so awesome, like all the others of course. That car crash was so heavy! Loved the emotions (: got tears in my eyes too! Can't wait to see what's going to happen! Keep on writing! :D Had to look up what poppy seeds were xd, funny word for me, we call it maanzaad, which means moonseeds if you'd literally translate it xd
Again, awesome chapter :D

Awwh! Cutiecutecutecute!

A crash? I must contemplate... JK! Great idea! But NO SLASH. Just, eww.. Plain old crash, sounds A-okay!

EWANNN! :3 love that man!

Loved it, loved it, loved it :D Great chapter!
I want a group hug over carrot cake too, but my friends don't like carrot cake xd
I'd like the idea about Lassie and Shawn but no slash, it's just not my thing, sorry xd
Looking forward to the next chapter :D