Pretty good. Hope the next one's soon

I think you should definitely continue the story. It's really good. I think you should put in either a dream or flashback of when Jazmine was born so as not to confuse the readers of how they ended up with a second child only four months before Christmas. But I like the fact that you have already put that they found Michael not that long after Selene released him.

Why does David always looks like as a child in your stories?