|Reviews for Eve's Christmas|
| TemperanceBooth1 11/27/12 . chapter 2
Pretty good. Hope the next one's soon
| TemperanceBooth1 11/25/12 . chapter 1
I think you should definitely continue the story. It's really good. I think you should put in either a dream or flashback of when Jazmine was born so as not to confuse the readers of how they ended up with a second child only four months before Christmas. But I like the fact that you have already put that they found Michael not that long after Selene released him.
| Anna-Selene-Darkness 11/11/12 . chapter 1
Why does David always looks like as a child in your stories?