again... your character building and pump action no nonsense approach is ... phew... an adrenaline rush! heh! whoa...keep it up... you see a lot deep down too so keep these undercurrents rolling!

Hiya... well I see you have a different take on this but well.. why not keep writing... it's the best way to explore how you write... and develop... as you go!

keep going !
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Well well! Eve... whats going on? Bosley ... why are u letting Eve get plastered?! hmmmmm! I hope Kates sister gets out okay... but i hope someone is gonna really look after Eve when they find her... or shes gonna end up a dead angel!

Yep i see trouble ahead with Eve. Her mind really isnt focussed on her job at all. Kate n Abby need to give her a talking to! Stand well back! Keep going... this looks like some good plot working going on! ;-)

Greetings...welcome to CA ffic! well i think i aint seen you here before unless its been a few yrs! well... you're certainly coming in from a fresh angle with present tense... nonetheless... it involves an angel with alcohol probs so... heh... some things never change ha ha! And Eve needs anger management councelling already! Intrigued as to where you're going to take us... ! And if you post faster than me...thats a plus right there too! ;-)