I really enjoy this work. Please update soon, or at least post about when it might be continued.

keeep it up!

Plz update :d

You evil, brilliant man. Ending a chapter of such an amazing story on a cliffhanger? Why must you torment us so? Please update soon.

I'm not sure if I should rejoice at the awesomeness or beat you with a stick for the cliffhanger. It's a conundrum. _

This is BRILLIANT! You are a evil evil person for having ANOTHER cliffhanger. I CANNOT wait to see what happens next. PLEASE post soon.

I love this story. You really capture the essense of Dresden. Your Marcone is surprising and enjoyable, you build on what glimpses of his softer side we see in the books extremely well. Does Harry know about the girl in the coma? Your plot is original and refreshing, it's nice to see a new plot not just a rehash of what Jim has already written. I wait with baited breath for the next chapter.

I am greatly enjoying this fic, it is one of if not the best Dresden Files stories on this site. I eagerly await the next chapter.

awesome story

interesting

*Happy Dance* Yay! You updated! I'm so happy :) I loved this chapter, kept me at the edge of my seat all the way and *gasp* another cliffhanger! You are going to kill me, you know that? I noticed a few errors, but nothing a bit of proof reading won't solve. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update. A.S.A.P.! Happy writing.

You have no idea how much I love this story.
It's amazing and wonderful and perfect. 3

Can't wait till the next chapter. I think you are doing each character stop on even though its a AU.

Oh I can't wait till the next chapter this is so good!

Amazing story! Viewpoints are great, idea superb. I enjoyed this very much :) -pls do continue!