Fabulous! I truly, truly enjoyed it. I love how you unfolded how he 'bumped' into her in the square; and all of the little details. Thanks so much. It was so wonderful, it was as if I watched it instead of read it. Superb job!

I love all the details. I can't wait to read more!

I'm curious where you're going with this. :-)

Looking forward to reading what happens next!

Oh. I really love this. This is off to a great start. I also love Daniel's list and how he really seemed to finally know what he wants. Update soon.

Great first chapter, can't wait to read more. Hope Daniel makes it to the end of his list :)

Great start. Can't wait for the next chapter.

ohh very goood... i like it.. thanks go detty

WoW! I love all the 'cloak and dagger' behind the scenes of how Daniel just happens to be in the right place to have Betty bump into him in Trafalgar Square! He's like a spy-very James Bond! He's so cute, with his little To Do list, Marry Betty, Make a Family...sigh! I love all your detaisl! Very intriguing start!