|Reviews for An Assassin's Story: Book One- Lin Xiao Li|
| Mew300 2/25/13 . chapter 10
Kind of a late review but yaaaayyy he's finally out :DD
Please update soon!
| Shinsun 1/30/13 . chapter 9
Hey, it's Catie. This is my fanfictnet account. I finally got to reading this and i'll say its interesting, though it could use some work. Im still very confused by this because i haven't seen the anime, but i was able to follow the story pretty easily. I was unnerved when i saw it had nine chapters, but theyre really short, so it wasn't a long read and i like that. I might watch black cat (once i finish FMAB, one anime at a time is the only way i function). Sorry i cant give a very elaborate review, I dont have much to say because i dont know much about this story.
| Mew300 1/17/13 . chapter 8
There are a few spelling errors here and there, but they don't afftect the story so don't worry. Please update soon! (:
| Sephiria Arks 1/16/13 . chapter 8
Yay! what will happen next, and what will Chronos's decision be?
| Sephiria Arks 1/2/13 . chapter 7
please get ch. 8 up! This story is pretty good, and i like how you do the point of views! You should read my stories, and check out my forums. here is my forum link:
| iWriteAnyStory 12/16/12 . chapter 6
This is so good! Poor Lin :-'(
| Mew300 12/15/12 . chapter 6
| Mew300 12/13/12 . chapter 5
Awwww poor kid how can he still smile like that and be so cheerful when he's got such a sad past ;_;
| Arkes13 12/6/12 . chapter 4
All alone and committing his first assassination all in one day no wonder he was chosen to be in chronos. But I do feel bad for him. Poor lin :'( keep up the great story!
| Arkes13 12/6/12 . chapter 3
Wow that was awesome. First murder I like where this is going *evil laughing*
| Mew300 11/19/12 . chapter 2
Oh yaaaaaay finally a story for Lin! My life is complete *jumps out of window*
Interesting story, but I think it would be better if the story has a little more description of scenes and stuff and not just dialogues. I hope you know what I mean lol
Can't wait for the update (:
| Arkes13 11/19/12 . chapter 2
That was so awesome. I can't wait to see what happens. What age is Xiaoli in here? Keep up the great story :D
| Arkes13 11/15/12 . chapter 1
Wow i like the begining. I think a betraying makes a very good story. Though you should consider being a little more descriptive. :D