Nicely written.
favorite line: He couldn't remember if being blurry was a criminal offence or not, but decided it probably was and he still couldn't remember when he last ate a tomato.

LOL
I can see this happening. Especially his eye roll at the ametuer robberey. :D

Very nice!

Nicely done.

I loved this. I love the Sweeney and Life on Mars, it was lovely to see them referenced.

I also loved Hathaway's concussed thoughts about the tomatoes and trying to arrest people for being blurry.

It was really good :)

Really enjoyable, thank you.

My only quibble is that the banks I know don't have bullet proof glass it's only shatter proof, other than that nice read.

Loved the Sweeeny reference! In fact they are going to be releasing The Sweeney on DVD next year.