 gabyhyatt 2008-11-08 . chapter 1good fic |
 ola 2006-11-07 . chapter 1 hehe, really cute. good job =) |
 Warg 2006-09-24 . chapter 1Hey..
Soft and amusing, slightly random.. things shaped out very well near the ending and the story took on a somewhat deeper turn.
Love your use of simple short sentencing here and Misao caught off guard again and again, but the end of it was worth it.
Great work.
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 Girl of 1000 Loves 2006-06-18 . chapter 1This was great. I would hate if someone caught me in a compromising situation like that! :D |
 jesphoenix05 2006-06-04 . chapter 1Oh this is so cute! And so typical of Misao to be so cheerfully forward! Short yet sweet! I loved it! |
 Midori Konbu 2006-05-06 . chapter 1Sweet... really sweet... |
 _yesu_follower_ 2005-10-30 . chapter 1 GREAT!
You really put everyone into character, except one little part, which is pretty insignificant.
Everything kept me hooked, personally.
It's always great to find a sweet little fanfic in the huge main course of the site!
I encourage you to keep writing! I'm certain it will get you somewhere.
God blessed you, giving you such writing skills that I have to wait a while to possess. |
 random person 2005-10-30 . chapter 1 hehe, the funniest thing is that I'm twelve... and i really tried the hand thing! -blush- And being old-fashioned is good. Right now, everything goes by so quickly! Slowness is the way for romance! (what do i know, being twelve? ^_^)
This story was great! |
 marbles 2005-05-25 . chapter 1 nice and fluffy. ^^ loved it ^^ |
 Karine Dragon'sheart 2005-04-15 . chapter 1Nice! A good ending.
Laters,
KD |
 ~*All Smiles*~ 2005-01-18 . chapter 1 Aw! So cute! |
 Keitorin 2005-01-16 . chapter 1I first read this one on tfme (always wondered what happened to that site?) and its always been one of my favorites its very cute I'm glad I found it here! |
 Crystal Winds 2004-11-11 . chapter 1Hehehe..that was pretty funny..Misao practicing..lol...but all in one..that was very a sweet fic..good work! |
 Neptune47 2004-08-29 . chapter 1Oh. My. Gosh. Just adorable! I love it, just like I love your other stories. Thank you for sharing! This story is going on my favorites list. |
 Mirune Keishiko 2004-04-06 . chapter 1whe!
yummy!!
i usually don't go for Aoshi/Misao fics (the really good ones tend to get avalanched by the hundreds of so-so well-intentioned ones, IMHO), but your piece certainly stood out. bravo for your very clever ending that was sweet but not saccharine! ^.^
a parting note--excellent writing: clear, concise, correct. you obviously know what you're doing. thank heavens. ^.^ |