Ah, so cute! I love it! Wonderful! Very well written.

I just want to tell you this is the most beautiful oneshot Aoshi x Misao I've ever read. Just it.

Sweet! I love how Misao runs back and continues Aoshi's thoughts.

¡Oh!

Is a very pretty fic, really cute and I wonder me if you let me translate it to Spanish please!

Kisses

good fic

hehe, really cute. good job )

Hey..

Soft and amusing, slightly random.. things shaped out very well near the ending and the story took on a somewhat deeper turn.

Love your use of simple short sentencing here and Misao caught off guard again and again, but the end of it was worth it.

Great work.

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This was great. I would hate if someone caught me in a compromising situation like that! :D

Oh this is so cute! And so typical of Misao to be so cheerfully forward! Short yet sweet! I loved it!

Sweet... really sweet...

GREAT!

You really put everyone into character, except one little part, which is pretty insignificant.

Everything kept me hooked, personally.

It's always great to find a sweet little fanfic in the huge main course of the site!

I encourage you to keep writing! I'm certain it will get you somewhere.

God blessed you, giving you such writing skills that I have to wait a while to possess.

hehe, the funniest thing is that I'm twelve... and i really tried the hand thing! -blush- And being old-fashioned is good. Right now, everything goes by so quickly! Slowness is the way for romance! (what do i know, being twelve? _)

This story was great!

nice and fluffy. loved it

Nice! A good ending.

Laters,

KD

Aw! So cute!