good fic

hehe, really cute. good job =)

Hey..

Soft and amusing, slightly random.. things shaped out very well near the ending and the story took on a somewhat deeper turn.

Love your use of simple short sentencing here and Misao caught off guard again and again, but the end of it was worth it.

Great work.

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This was great. I would hate if someone caught me in a compromising situation like that! :D

Oh this is so cute! And so typical of Misao to be so cheerfully forward! Short yet sweet! I loved it!

Sweet... really sweet...

GREAT!

You really put everyone into character, except one little part, which is pretty insignificant.
Everything kept me hooked, personally.

It's always great to find a sweet little fanfic in the huge main course of the site!
I encourage you to keep writing! I'm certain it will get you somewhere.

God blessed you, giving you such writing skills that I have to wait a while to possess.

hehe, the funniest thing is that I'm twelve... and i really tried the hand thing! -blush- And being old-fashioned is good. Right now, everything goes by so quickly! Slowness is the way for romance! (what do i know, being twelve? ^_^)
This story was great!

nice and fluffy. ^^ loved it ^^

Nice! A good ending.
Laters,
KD

Aw! So cute!

I first read this one on tfme (always wondered what happened to that site?) and its always been one of my favorites its very cute I'm glad I found it here!

Hehehe..that was pretty funny..Misao practicing..lol...but all in one..that was very a sweet fic..good work!

Oh. My. Gosh. Just adorable! I love it, just like I love your other stories. Thank you for sharing! This story is going on my favorites list.

whe!
yummy!!
i usually don't go for Aoshi/Misao fics (the really good ones tend to get avalanched by the hundreds of so-so well-intentioned ones, IMHO), but your piece certainly stood out. bravo for your very clever ending that was sweet but not saccharine! ^.^
a parting note--excellent writing: clear, concise, correct. you obviously know what you're doing. thank heavens. ^.^