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| Reviews for Alana |
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  lili 5/6/13 . chapter 5 keep on writing, the story is realy good |
| FarmersDaughter 5/5/13 . chapter 5 Hhhmmm...it seems that Alana knows how to do too much. Like, she can do everything (except shoot a bow). I think there should be more things that she cannot do. Please dont be offended, I'm just trying to help. |
| Ranger Robbin 5/3/13 . chapter 5 Yea much better! I like how the story was longer. Sarcasm is good. And yes, good mentor apprentice relationship. You know what I think? I think will and Alana should get in a fight and halt helps them out. Ugh I sound like a teacher don't I ? Ok back to teen. Yea great story keep writing PLEASE! Ok that sounds more like me. |
| Lynkay 5/3/13 . chapter 5 It's good so far! It has great potential. I have to clear something up though: Halt was actually one who agreed with Will and Evanlyn to let her in the battle for Skandia. I know it is part of your story's plot line, but I know Halt isn't sexist, I know most of the Rangers in the core aren't sexist either. I hope you do not take affence to any of this, I am mearly wondering why. I love it so far and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
 maggiestarjump 5/4/13 . chapter 5OMG this is only your FIRST story on fan fic. ? AMAZING! But, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *on knees* Put some more Halt in there Or make Alana become a tiny bit like Halt |
| kitty.bee1904 5/3/13 . chapter 5 Great chapter! This is a great story and it made my day when you updated it! One thing I would mention is that Halt should eventually warm up to her and see her potential... But I love how you have set up the story. Please write more! |
| Savannah Silverstone 5/3/13 . chapter 5 Woo! Sorry I don't have much to say about this chapter, except update sooon! |
| Ranger Robbin 4/2/13 . chapter 4 Ok good so far. Needs more action. Mabe she almost gets captured or they go to the gathering and all the boys taunt her and she beats them up. Chapters need to be longer. Sorry for all the criticism but really, I love the story. |
| Guest 3/25/13 . chapter 4 Great story! |
| angel14108 3/26/13 . chapter 4 This is a really good fanfiction and I look forward to an update! |
| FarmersDaughter 3/14/13 . chapter 4 That's right Alana! Show em who's boss! Loved the chap! |
| Yoffa 3/15/13 . chapter 4 LOOVE IT! PLEASE CONTINUE! |
| kitty.bee1904 3/14/13 . chapter 4 I love the story! Please keep writing more! I really like Alana's charictar and it's a wonderful story. Please write more as soon as you can! Kitty |
| Savannah Silverstone 3/14/13 . chapter 4 I know you have to add romance every now and then!I like most of it so far... I don't wanna write some criticism in a review cause i make some of those mistakes too myself so if you really wanna know what you can work on from me, just PM me! i |
| Yoffa 3/9/13 . chapter 3 I LOVE IT! PLEASE CONTINUE! |
