Twatwrd still behaving like he runs the world.
Like Esme would have her ex back, apparently she knows that she isn't his mate, but Edweirdo is ignoring that as usual.

can you please update soon I love ur story so much please hurry.

OMG this is amazing! Please update soon!

So so so...AWESOME!... when are you updating author-buddy :) your story is so good, even if you were slightly cruel in leaving that cliff hanger . Y U DO DIS AUTHOR! :) I love your story so much i tend to re-read both chapters over and over again to the point of actually memorizing it :) I'm curious as to what Bella will do, Oh seeing as their all vampires, (the cullens) does that mean they heard what edward said? Is there going to be conflict with that? PLEASE UPDATE! I WOULD MARRY YOU IF I COULD! This story is too good to be true. :) Its like a gift from the muses :) :P er... forget that line :) But over all I must say your an awesome writer, and i do wish to read more when it comes out :) thank you Ms Author :)

It's good so far, so please continue

Great new chapter! Has anyone else volunteered to be the Beta? Because if not then I would be happy to. :) Just let me know.

Edwards a douche

Um, there's a little confusion because in the last chapter you had Alice saying Esme was their "older sister"/Rosalie's sister.
Other then that and the run-on sentences the plot is really good.

I really like the plot so far. But you may want to have someone beta-read this because there are a lot of run-on sentences.

I'm hooked already! You're AMAZING!

Thanks for the update. I really like this pairing BUT why this cliffhanger? Now I HAVE TO stare at my computer until you update... I want to know how this will continue

I cant wait for the next chapter sounds like it will be a great story ! :D x

Wow I love it! Update soon please

Hi! Loved the first chapter. I hope you plan to continue.. :-)

more soon please! i love it!