Ah...yep, you are on my watch list, two chapters and you already have my attention, congrats.

Well now...that was most interesting. Volt was always the tough guy. And I now find I can't seem to round up something to say besides: Great story, kept me reading.

one word...wow...haha great job..keep up the good work.

Wow I can't believe I skipped the first chapter and then read on. It caught my attention during the second I have no idea why though it just did. Volt's my favorite charater from The Bouncer. Love your story, update soon. ^_^

*aw* Volt. *m'm hugs for the hunk*
Interesting stuff going on.
Update ASAP!

u better continue... or else!

I like Volt too. Could you please please please send me something about his and the other characters pasts? I want to write Bouncer fanfiction, but I can't get passed Dauragon on the Galeos. Please?

This has a certain "feel" to it that makes it so cool and alluring. So far I love it. When is the next chapter up?

WOW!!! that's suspenseful! i think you have a good voice for Volt ~ i can really imagine him talking like that ^_^ AND i wanna see him get busy wit Leah ~ please write more!!!!!!! ^_^

cool story; you should really continue it ^_^

Underread catagory as it I will say this is a very good story. And good job keeping Volt in character too. Keep up the good work.

Very good! Keep it up!

okay -- i finished w/ chapter 11 -- i hope you're working on chapter 12 ... ^_^ ... y'know what your story reminds me of? film noir. i like it & i think it's good ... looking forward to chapter 12 ++++ ^_^

dayyum, you're good! you give good sentences, paragraphs & descriptions -- not easy to find on fanfic.net -- keep going! i'm gonna keep reading! ^_^