You have to update this! I'm obsessed! Please!

It's really good :-)

Beth xx

Brilliant scenario, you captured Eddi's Mum really well. The banter is on top form.

And im still dying for the next chapter! you have me hooked! :) You have Luc spot on as always, can just pciture him meeting Eddi's mother! Only wish we had the chance to see it!
Poor Luc! Really looking forward to future shower scenes and seeing where Luc has to sleep now her mother has arrived... ;) rock and roll :)

Another fantastic chapter you got lucs sarcastic attitude brilliantly, loving eddis more all over luc too funny. Looking forward to the next chapter

I am loving this. The banter is too funny. You bring a new dimension to each chapter.

Bex another amazing chapter so funny

hahahahaaa :) This had me laughing out loud! Its all just so easy to picture, the slamming of the door would have made such a comical onscreen scene! Love the book explanation, so thanks for that! :) Gutted they were interupted by the doorbell!
This fic is like a book I just dont want to put down! Roll on Ch25! :D

I actually love you for writing this fic.

Every chapter is amazing, this whole story is amazing. I can't get enough of it.

Bless poor Luc. Loving this story!

Haha, Love cheeky Luc there :)
Nice turn on the story! Does clearly explain how his past has made him how he is! Looking forward to finding out more & how Eddi is going to react! More soon please! :D

Very moving chapter. Can't wait for chapter 17.

Another great chapter...this is a real good story.
x

Bellissimo ! Very moving. This whole story is amazing.

Aw this is so cute!:),
I'm loving how you've added other bits about them both and brought her back!
Can't wait for next chapter!:)xx