|Reviews for The Surprising Birth of Lucinda Slicker|
| Snowbird forever 12/15/12 . chapter 7
I'm smiling and crying at the same time, this was perfect! The way Jake holds onto Lucy and Teresa...you showed so well what his parents did to him, the pain they caused and I am sure he won't do that to Lucy. I loved how you wrote Lucy catching his finger, it melt my heart when I read it! And his reaction to her eyes - okay, it's official, I am crying now! :-D What did Cloud Dancing talk about to Teresa? And do I need to say that I LOVED those two crack heads? :-D He didn't faint, hahahaha! XD Awesome chapter, I love this story so much! More, please! *puppy eyes* :-D
| Maria 12/14/12 . chapter 7
Great description of her birth, Jake supporting his wife and Cloud Dancing accepted to deliver little Lucy. Can't wait to read more of this!
| Linda4HIM59 12/14/12 . chapter 7
Jake pressed the tip of his finger into her pink palm. Her strong grasp nearly brought him to his knees... Wow, love that. But what got me most was - I had forgotten what Jake's siblings names were! His sister was Lucinda! Omgosh! That brought tears to my eyes!
"Jake," Teresa squeezed his fingers reassuringly. "Give Lucinda a chance to live now." Wow, that was an awesome response, bravo! What an awesome finish to this story - Jake at last finding peace with the world. Loved it. Thank you so much for this story!
| Linda4HIM59 12/6/12 . chapter 6
oh man, I didn't get the alert for this chapter! Loved how Cloud Dancing took charge in his gently authoritative way :) Love that he called the bassinet a 'fancy teepee', hehe cute! Love that Teresa was able to get over her dislike of Indians and accept CD's help. Love Jake's bumbling, hehe.
"The man has a daughter," he heard Cloud Dancing whisper next to his shoulder.
Aww, that was so sweet of CD, a way of telling Jake I think that he now respected him and acknowledged his growth and maturity.
Super chapter. Loved how Jake was so supportive of Teresa and constantly told her how much he loved her. Enjoyed it all. :)
| AA 12/2/12 . chapter 6
I just stumbled onto your story and I just had to say - it is a wonderfully touching story..
| Snowbird forever 12/2/12 . chapter 6
I can't login at the moment,so I am writin a review like this. I love it! "Dazed fool" and "tiny screaming creature" had me laugh so hard! I loved Jake's words to Teresa during the birth, you got me in tears over here! But, mostly I liked amusement Teresa and Cloud Dancing shared on Jake's account, hahahaha, crashing around the house in order not to miss the birth of his baby! XD He is a she! :-D Looking forward to read next chapter so much! Well done, girl! Snowbird forever
| Linda4HIM59 12/1/12 . chapter 5
"Jake felt something akin to a radiating heat began to pulse around his heart, reaching warmly around his body, and filling him with an emotion he'd never felt before. Closing his eyes, he imagined a bright silver thread reaching out from his heart and braiding itself around a similar one in Teresa. He felt bound. He felt a calming peace that had never been there before."
This was breathtaking. So beautifully written. I'm so happy for Jake finding happiness. :)
Wow, Cloud Dancing to deliver the baby! This is awesome! Can't wait to read more. :)
| Snowbird forever 12/1/12 . chapter 5
Oh, I was lurking on mail waiting to get notification about a new chapter of this story! It's my absolute favorite from you! :-D Hahahaha, you got me laughing like crazy at Jake's stampedo through the kitchen,nearly falling down over kitchen table!xD I could so picture that! :-D I am surprised he didn't trip over his feet at the stairs,hahaha! He even made Teresa smile! :-D Lol, the description of his legs at the beginning of the chapter showed his state of mind-completely lost!xD Aaaaaw, I love it when he pressed his lips onto Teresa's stomach and just stayed there! And she caressing his hair until goosebumps left his skin. That was awesome line! You showed once again the change of Jake that Teresa caused. She woke him true self up. He's gonna be such a great Dad! And he still is persuaded it's a boy!xD Yeah, Cloud Dancing is here! It's like I can hear those words again: "Pinch running for Mr. Slicker will be Cloud Dancing!",hahaha,let the race begin!xD Update,girl,I love this story! Hope Jake stays on his feet!xD
| Linda4HIM59 11/27/12 . chapter 4
Oh I love this story! You write it so well. Chuckled at Jake's word fumble, hehe, so like him. :) And YAY Cloud Dancing will save the day. Can't wait for more :)
| Snowbird forever 11/26/12 . chapter 4
Hahahahahahahahahahaha, oh my God, I'm doubling over from laughter! My baby's having a wife, hahahahahahahahahaha!xD Aaaaw, loved how Cloud Dancing emphasized that the man doesn't come first for Jake anymore! Oh, will Cloud Dancing make it in time? Or is Jake going to deliver "he is a she" to world?xD Hahahahaha, I LOVE THIS! :-D update soon, please!
| Snowbird forever 11/25/12 . chapter 3
Okay, girl, I don't know how you do this, but you are getting better with each new chapter! Your writing just amazes me! Firstly, I loved Teresa just sitting there, talking to her unborn child, I could just imagine her and than Jake coming over with the presents...had to giggle at Hank's " " hehehehehe, that sound sjust like something Hank would do. And "crooked stitches. Those most be Dr. Mike's contributions" had me rolling on the floor laughing! :D :D :D Poor Dr Mike, hahahaha! :))))
But, my favorite part is:
He's coming! Yes, she's coming! :D :D :D :D Oh, oh, oh I just can not WAIT for Lucy to be born! Just hoping Jake won't faint! xD Update soon, please!
| Maria 11/21/12 . chapter 2
What a lovely scene of Teresa and Jake! You made them so enchanting, so much more charming then in the series. Can't wait to read more of this!
| Snowbird forever 11/18/12 . chapter 2
This was breathtaking! First the song,than Jake thinking about his childhood; I believe that this moment shaped him to be a great Dad. And the moments of pure love and passion between theme were written perfect! Such a poetic chapter,thanks for this.
| Linda4HIM59 11/15/12 . chapter 1
You are an excellent writer! So very descriptive! Loved this, all the little touches from the show woven into your own creation, brilliant! :) The house you described really brings to mind the drawing we saw on the show, and I love how he found the post of the fence! Wow, bravo! Love how you are writing their love. I really like this Jake. The image of the house surrounded by sweet smelling flowers was heavenly. You said a lot in a few words. Enjoyed it. :)
| Snowbird forever 11/15/12 . chapter 1
This was so lovely! You portray a real family bond, i just love that! My fav part was when they kissed and Jake felt baby kicking. No more teasing Mum,hahaha!