|Reviews for Ethan|
| blackmoon9793 4/21/13 . chapter 11
Hey, it's been a couple months now. Any chance of an update soon?
| tascha 4/7/13 . chapter 11
Still no update? I've a bad Ethan/Clois withdrawal...
| Guest 4/4/13 . chapter 11
Still no update :(
| tascha 3/12/13 . chapter 11
Pleeeeeaaaase... Update soonish!
| MelsAFan 3/6/13 . chapter 11
where are you?
| Justclois 2/22/13 . chapter 11
Update soon please. it's been a while :)
| shezz05 2/15/13 . chapter 11
This is bloody awesome as always and im sorry it has taken me this long to reply.
What can i say Ethan at school was as brilliant as you made it out to be, loved how he, and as many of us do as well, got caught up in just having friends that at first even though what they were doing was going against his moral beliefs, it was heart breaking to see him struggle over the decision of wether standing up for what he believes in and by doing so he might alienate him self from his peers (excuse my pun) haha or just keeping quiet and going along with the other boys.
Loved how he sort out both Oliver and Clark to see what to do or not and their little talks with him were so heart warming, quite frankly sometimes i wish i was that strong as a kid! He's got balls, Ethan thats for sure and the scene with him and patrick, Brilliant!
Im also loving Ethan having that little feeling called jealousy, with seeing all of his peers, mums, pick them up from school and loved how he couldnt wait to have lois pick him up so he could feel normal argghh how i loved it!
I adore the way you also had Clark tell Ethan, i think you nailed it. Because come on how hard would it be to tell a 5 year old that they are different and that they would always be different, and i think that doing that through a story of how Clark arrived there in smallville was bloody brilliant and plus Ethan and Clark together are so cute anyways :D
Justice League how you intrigue me, Loved to see more action in this chapter, it was awesome to see all of our heroes in action, plus prime time to add in a bit of mystery about the hell is Sylance trying to achieve, which you have done brilliantly.
Loved how Bruce was brought into it and his meeting with Lex, 1. it was awesome and 2. it reminded me of their meeting in smallville season 11 comic they had i think a few issues ago, but anyway totally believable and totally awesome!
The one thing i do love is that if your going to have a meeting with the bad guy and superman of course it has to involve Lois being kidnapped by them! Just amazing, though with baddies in general i dont get why they want to destroy the world, one would think that in doing that they would also be destroying themselves as well haha silly bad guys!
Now the reveal all i can say is, LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it! i adore the way you had West put pressure on Lois to have this new article about the Blur and that Lois stuck to her guns and went yeah I'm not going to pressure him into telling me and after all that heart ache you had over writting this it was just a powerful and simple of having him tell her on the roof, bloody amazing. I seriously cannot wait to see them together as a couple now in both their work and personal relationship now, that hes finally told her.
Also speaking of work, i think i've finally figured it out after my oblivious ways in past chapters, Its Lauren! She's his mum, duh thats why she hates when Ethans being mentioned or leaves quickly when he comes to work, her name starts with a K and that was the intial that was left in the note, its probably why i hated her with a passion to begin with, you said you had clues layered out and i think i finally woke up and started taking in some stuff, so lets hope now I'm actually correct and havent spent all this time for it to be someone else haha
Anyways another Fabulous update, keep up the amazing work and update soon!
| artephiussnow 2/4/13 . chapter 1
Love this story. Cant wait for the update..
| reeven 2/3/13 . chapter 11
Love your story, and love this chapter, Lois knows!
| Sue13Bono 2/2/13 . chapter 11
Once again, you have knocked this chapter out of the bag. It was so detailed, lots of juicy content! I thought you wrote the Watchtower/Justice League moments really well, and Bruce really sounded like Bruce, you got those characters down pat.
Ethan at school, we knew that was going to happen, but I loved the way Ethan's attitude changed after his talk about his heritage with Clark, it gave him the strength to accept his abilities even more and it was so mature of him to take the jibes from Patrick (turning the other cheek so to speak) but at the same time, keep getting back up to face him. Patrick got frightened pretty quickly (so typical bully). It sounds as though Ethan will find his way through school just fine.
The DP rooftop - OMG finally! Thanks for finally letting Clark tell Lois, I loved that scene and it made me laugh how after he told her, he was the one more surprised and shocked by the situation. He totally didn't didn't see that coming that Lois knew his secret and Ethan's, boy, guys can be blind sometimes!
Ok, I am really intrigued about this Kelsey Lauren character, what is going on with her? I think her name is significant, otherwise why would you make such a big thing about her name and Lauren being the surname! I haven't figured it out, but that's why this is such a good story and its keeping me wanting more.
Thanks again for taking the time with this story, I can see each chapter played out by the Smallville cast, it fits perfectly.
| artephiussnow 2/2/13 . chapter 11
I think this story is awesome I love ethans character. Cant wait fir the update. :-)
| chronos the cookie thief 2/1/13 . chapter 11
is lauren ethan's mom?
| Guest 2/1/13 . chapter 11
I love your story ! And this was a great chapter but I'd would love to see more romantic interaction between lois and clark please
Hope to read more !
| B 1/31/13 . chapter 11
i hope soon that we get to read about when becomes lois "mommy" to ethan
| TiGracchus 1/31/13 . chapter 11
I really like this story. I think you did a great job capturing the uncertain almost uneasy relationship between Bruce and Clark.
Great job! I can't wait to read more.