Poor Bren... Hope she tells what's happening... Merry Christmas!

Its a good story. You are writing in a differant langue than your normal so keep going we the reader know what you are saying.

Wow! Hodgins... love it! More, please?

Hey Girl! Soory for the late! loved it! That poor Brennan! I almost cried, Really! I need more please...!

Awww poor Brennan, her life in foster care was so tragic it breaks my heart. Good story so far, keep going, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D

Getting interesting! What's gonna happening?

Booth may have to intervene with her "Father". Update when you can.

For english not being your first language, I thing you did fantastic. Your story is unique and I'm very curious to see what happens next. Please continue :D

Hey Girl! I really like it! it's a very good start, please give it another chapter!

That is a very good story line and I really hope that you do another chapter I would really like to read that because the start seems so powerful. Good job.

This is very good *-* Actually, I'm brazilian, and I've read the portuguese version of this story, which is very good, by the way :) But for some reason I prefer the english version, LOL! Crazy, isn't it?
So, what can I say? This is great! Go ahead girl, keep writing!
Looking foward to read more.

lovely, well written. Can't wait for more. Great story line
xx

I would like to see you continue your story.