Ok, so now I have to read the main story... I seem to be doing this with things lately. Well done all the same... I may have to skip ahead to chapter 15 or 16 just to find myself satisfied.

I can't read quick enough...

Becca is adorable... and seems pretty spot on from your perspective.

He has more guts than I do, I'd have been afraid to tell Kim that she didn't make any sense.

I assumed the Romanian Brit kept the wine on hand, and until you pointed out her luggage I'd almost assumed that she had a standing room at his place, as she obviously has a key.
... and if that doesn't make sense go back and read your closing comments ;-)

I'll admit I have reservations about reading this, but you've executed it well so far.

You're incredible. This story is delightful-the humor and attitude is perfect throughout. I especially love the strong friendship element here between Payson and Sasha-it definitely makes me want to read 16x8 to see where the romance comes in!

Thank YOU for writing this! And I really like the way this ties in with the 16c8 universe, so it's like it's a separate story but with tons mnore that we can read as well! Thanks again for a lovely fic!

loved it! you're writing is just so easy going, can't help but fall into it.

LOVE IT! I need to go re-read 16x8 now...

I keep reading this story on my phone and then not remembering to come back and review it when I get on a real computer. I love everything about this story. In particular for this chapter I love Mark's thoughts on the relationship, about how they seemed like a long time couple rather than a new one. Mark has always seemed very observant to me. Can't wait to see him talk to Sasha!

Love! I think becca and pays relationship is so funny! Mayb this gives pay ideas and she realizes she loves Sasha and makes a move?

update soon!

lmao! loved this chapter! so not happy that there's no more to read right now. i'll be looking forward to the next one. :)

ha! maxine cracks me up.