*sniffles.* so sweet I loved it loads!

Nice ending! I loved the book Daniel found! And I do hope you decide to write a sequel!

Poor Hades, I'm feeling very sorry for her/him. It would seem Daniel and Hades have much in common.

It was a great chapter, with some interesting, if heart-breaking background.

Looking forward to more of this story!

Every once in a while, when I'm convinced (again) that nothing really new can be invented in the SG-1 universe, a fan fiction story comes up that breaks new ground. Yours just did.

As sad and creepy as Hades' story is, I love it! And I generally love fanfics where the Goa'uld are not just all stereotypical villains (or noble ponces if you count the Tok'ra) but multidimensional characters on their own. So, can I have more? :)

This is an AMAZING story! You are an excellent writer. :)

Hades is certainly different! You do a good job of portraying her as an emotional, unstable poet in this chapter ;) Looking forward to more! I am really getting interested in her background!

If anything, the story is getting more interesting. I look forward to the next chapter, and to what Hades (perhaps) has to write.

I still really like this story (and Hades). Very entertaining!

Becoming a very interesting tale. And I especially appreciate your attention to grammar, spelling and punctuation!

Keep writing!

I have no idea when this story takes place (though obviously before the Goa'uld empires started falling apart), but it is a fun and different story! I like Hades - maybe she should join the Tok'ra. Looking forward to hearing what happens when SG-1 shows up!

I'm rather liking this so far, I'm hopeful there will be more to come!