Please update! I am loving this fanfic :D

I like this story. Though its been a while since I watched Fire Fly.

Pretty cool variation of the Story, I'm liking the addition of Rae. I wonder though, will it still be considered Rayne if it isn't River? I think so, but you got the hammer, you're flying it. More updates! maybe a Verse' of it's own, ya think?

Interesting story, definitely original...

Will she not remember anything of her old life? That would make it better, otherwise your just retelling the story with one extra character.

It brightens my day to read this! There isn't enough Jayne love in the world! :) I love your story!

I like it! Entertainment! Yeah!

Hello. Please write more of this, it is really good! I am loving Rae and can't wait for a little Rayne!

Love it 3 Everything about this story is awesome :)

Loved it! Thank you for including the translations at the top, it's way easier than looking them up on google... Can't wait to read more!

I do believe that this story has WAY more in it than just a one-shot. Keep it goin' I want to see what happens! Also, I noticed no Doc or River, could maybe be comin' along in the next chapter(wink, wink, hint, hint)?

My first Firefly fic! :) Can't wait to see what happens next, so please continue!