Hi there. First of all I wouldn't have guesse that your first language wasn't English, and your story was great. It really makes you sympathize with Lindsay which is something you don't really do in the book. As for the mean review by "guest", it's not their username, it just means they aren't logged in and it shows up as "guest". But good story

Interesting, to write that scene from Lindsay's point of view - especially imagining just how hard she works to keep up that confident image.