Wow, you know? This is so what we women are like during these -*mhrm!*- trying times... It's scary how perfect that was. Poor men, I can't imagine how much we put them through during all that...

Oh no! is it what i think it is? 0-0 Fuck thats gross!

Some comments as I read this...
I love character-based pieces. So this is pretty cool. But I just can't picture Monger ever out of uniform or less than perfectly groomed, however.
Midol? If you could work in quick explanations of US-specific brands just to help out, it would be great.
I'm not sure why Susan seems to think her male friends aren't being supportive. Unless she's just getting hysterical and angry and not stopping to think.
I like the scene where Susan hurt Cockroach. Snapped her back nicely (and his, in another sense of the word...).
No idea why Cockroach doesn't just TELL her what they are doing...
"2012" is painfully stupid, but looks really cool... (nothing to do with your main story of course...)
Angry Monger is funny.
Minor grammar niggle: When a character says something, it should end with a comma then lower case (save for names of course): "This is the right way," the genius scientist insisted. Not "Damn grammar Nazi." The fish-ape retorted.
I like that she has a nicer room. And she realises what her friends were actually doing. Still think Dr C should have told her earlier, but that's an in-story issue, so not a problem.
I'm not sure it's the best approach to describe Dr C's fingers as "incredibly small" - it makes him seem small (and Susan more normal, relatively speaking). Something like "which looked incredibly small in comparison" would help reinforce her size. But Ch. 4 is very nice. I generally love Dr C/Susan moments of friendship.
Overall, very nice indeed. I am a bit of a sucker for character-based pieces like this which examine the strange friendship among these characters, and keep things nice and subtle.

I need more cuteness

B.O.B.! I can't get enough! XD

I'm so sad that this story is over! I mean, we all knew it was going to be a short one and would be over soon, but... Aw.

Hopefully, something about Alice is coming soon...? :D

Poor Doc. He just ends up in the worst positions to be found. XD And Yay! for going to fight the Loch Ness Monster! That'll be very interesting.

Well, this was quite a good story Cel. It was interesting, sweet, and you wrote the characters perfectly. I can't wait to see what you write next. :)

Man my account got hacked by my own mother... well at least I can still review, loved it. Loved this story all the way. So adorable. :3

AWWWWWWWWWWW! Totally adorable mush!
Seriosly BEST. ENDING. EVARRR!
Peferct ending for the perfect story :)
Loved it all! :D

Alice Granger, huh? Can't wait to hear more about her!

Aww so cute and sweet of Doc man you got to see Rise of the Guardians? you so lucky. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter! Those last words sound like trouble ahead. c:

Woooooo an update!

Awesome, sooo adorable :')
I was just sat reading it going AAWWWWWWWWWWW!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Uh-oh, looks like Doc's gonna fall asleep again. And Alice sounds like a pretty cool girl. It'll be nice to hear more about her later. :)

Dude, awesome. Funny as hell! Would have never have thought of...THAT as a writing subject. I applaud you!

IhtHM

Poor Doc. Getting blamed for being asleep, when he probably had the hardest job of all.

I do hope this helps Susan.

Such good boys. Love to see Dr. C. with a bit of an attitude.