I'm so glad you continued this! It's such a fun AU to play with, even after the finale. :)

Please write another chapter I can hardly wait

Audrey has regain consciousness and meets the person she is seeking and has more questions than ever. Will she find the answers she is seeking and will she recover all of Sarah's memories of Nathan and Duke's time in 1955?

I do love your stuff, and I should have reviewed several stories before, but this one I find particularly moving. Part of it is the poem you use, which I immediately went and looked up the whole of, but the image of her "pilgrim soul", moving from one life to another without any power of her own...wow. Then you took that idea and ran with it and though we know now that's not quite how it happened in 1955, the emotion from Nathan, loving Audrey even as Sarah, and being unable to see one without the other, is so spot on. The way he stumbles from one to the other in his head, and he doesn't know what to do so he just reaches for her hand... once I saw that we would have a little wait until the end of the season I knew you were the one to run to for a little Haven fix. I do have one question for you, though: about four writers have mentioned Nathan's ring, but while I remember the Teagues giving Audrey Sarah's ring I don't remember seeing Nathan's, and I usually catch those things so it's driving me crazy, so where do we see Nathan's ring? Oh, and please write many more Haven fanfics.

Very cool.

This fic made me feel everything...perfect! Thank you.

A little confusing toward the middle but that might just be due to my lack of sleep, interesting update soon.

Eek! This is such a wonderful start! I can't wait to read how you flesh this out :)

Amazing! That's exactly how I want today's episode. I know it probably won't be that way, but a girl can dream, right? lol I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Thank you for writing and sharing!

Wow wonderful job. Very interesting and intriguing story, looking forward to see where you take this story.

A very exciting story; can't wait to read more.

Ooh I really love it so far. Interestingly enough I had the same thought of Sarah touching him/his blood could trigger her memories so it's cool to see someone writing about that. Really cannot wait for the rest! And YAY Sarah tonight!

What a beautiful quote! It works so well with the story and where the story will go. I have to admit, I feel a bit icky about Nathan being the Colorado Kid's father and it's not because I don't ship Nathan/Audrey. I feel like Nathan/Sarah is sort of strange to me and having Nathan be the Colorado Kid's father because of some time paradox or whatever is just very strange and cheap on behalf of the writers of the show. But that's just my opinion. I'm sure the episode will be AMAZING, but I'm curious to see how the writers will explain Sarah, her personality and her relationship to those around her in 1955 and those who come from the future in 2010 (our past... funny). I am, however, very intrigued with how you are writing this!

You sucked me right in from the beginning and the way you juxtapose Nathan's thoughts and emotions coupled with the drama/Sarah's fainting spell is absolutely beautiful. I might not be a total fan of the idea in theory, but I actually really love what you are writing because your writing is so pulsating and pops to life on the page (screen) with your vivid descriptions and snapshots of Nathan's fluctuating emotional state.

Anxiously awaiting another awesome update from you! Excited to see where you decide to take this story. :)