|Reviews for Come On Closer - THE SEQUEL|
| OpenMindedPerson 3/7/13 . chapter 7
I love this.
I hope you update soon!
| nannygirl 3/1/13 . chapter 7
Great work on this latest chapter!
I was surprised to hear that Jackie was actually considering doing the stripping thing for Eric. I understand that she wants to help him I just hope that it doesn’t freak him out or make things worse. Reading the little things that Jackie did do in the meantime was great—wonderfully done!
And it was so great to see Hyde again, I’m glad that he came back to help Eric and of course his cover line of doing it so Jackie wouldn’t constantly be calling him was very Hyde. And as a zennie I appreciate that we can still see them getting along somewhat. Sam came along too, thought you did a good job at writing her, didn’t make her as evil or selfish as she comes out in other stories. The advice she had for Jackie though, Oh boy. Jackie better be careful when Kitty tried to follow Sam’s advice she set her hair on fire!
Terrific work on the last scene with Jackie and Hyde having a nice talk and Sam and Eric having their own talk—wonder what kind of trouble Sam’s story is gonna cause lol Can only imagine some of the looks on the characters faces in that scene lol
Fabulous job once again! Really enjoying the story! I’m looking forward to seeing what happens next! Till then keep up the very terrific work!
| nannygirl 3/1/13 . chapter 6
Another fantastic chapter!
Yay! I was right about the tie! No need to apologize! I thought you did a very nice job at describing that box scene—hey, I caught on to the tie thing! :)
I really enjoyed the phone call with Hyde and Jackie. Yes Hyde was a bit grumpy but who isn’t when they first wake up lol I like that the two of them have a sort of friendship. They aren’t best of friends but we get the feeling that this isn’t the first time in years that they’ve spoken to each other. Thought it was sweet of Jackie to call him up with the plan of the guys coming to help Eric with his depression. I really hope that having guys there will help Eric out :D He needs his friends now and it stinks that they all live so far away.
So Hyde’s still with the stripper. Mixed feelings there, just cuz I never liked Sam’s character. Lol Finding out what was going on with Kelso and Fez though was great! had to laugh a bit at how much alike their situations are to the actors who played them…well the romances that AK and WV had before. And Kelso working with computers! Too cool! A little nod to AK’s Two and a Half Men character, perhaps? Loved all the phone conversations with Jackie and the boys, it seems like they’ve kept in touch every once in awhile and that’s very nice to hear. :)
Looking forward to the reunion and only hope that it cheers Eric up instead ending up making him miss Donna even more, the poor thing.
Wonderful job once more! Really did enjoy this chapter! Will be back to read the next chapter soon! Till then keep up the terrific work!
| RevertedLogic 2/28/13 . chapter 7
Very good chapter! I have a feeling-despite that Eric was a little drunk-that Hyde might have let him in on what Jackie was planning. This may be the only story where Sam is nice. Good chapter and can't wait for the next chapter
| lynnette15 2/28/13 . chapter 7
This chapter was awesome! Its was funny especially sam trying to tell jackie how to get eric into bed. I can't wait to see if she actually tries it, it wil prolly be amusing seeing as how she would normally not do something like that lol I can't wait
| Marla's Lost 2/28/13 . chapter 7
I liked this - didn't see anything that I would have deemed smutty - Sam was nice (for a change) and her advice was real world.
Wondering what Eric and Hyde talked about Hmmmm...
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| DFT 2/28/13 . chapter 7
All girls need at the very least a little girl talk about the guys!
| SmokinAK47 2/25/13 . chapter 6
Good chapter and well written, I like Jackie pondering whether or not to strip for Eric. The next chapter should be good with Sam making an appearance, who knows what would happen..
| cajunghost 2/25/13 . chapter 6
I like this story and I liked this chapter. some people have a one track mind everyone keeps bringing up her stripping for Eric hmmm.
| Marla's Lost 2/25/13 . chapter 6
Hyde was really an a$$ in this chapter wasn't he? Fez and a potential underage girlfriend with Kelso and a MILF? You are right, Eric isn't the one with a problem any more!
This was a good chapter and an easy read.
| DFT 2/25/13 . chapter 6
Eric is going to be a hard case even for Jackie!
| nannygirl 2/23/13 . chapter 5
A very terrific chapter this was!
It’s really nice to see that things with Jackie staying at The Forman House are going so well, at least with Red and Kitty. Poor Eric though, he’s still so very heartbroken and it’s been years the poor thing. Can imagine him going and spending time at the Pinciotii house every morning, but that really isn’t too healthy and I hope Jackie can help him with that.
I really loved the JE interaction in this chapter! Especially the part where they were going through Jackie’s box. I loved all the things that were pulled out but the McDonalds bag that represented Steven had to be my favorite! It’s like a little onehsot just waiting to be written lol
Oo and the tie! She saved Eric’s tie from the last story right? The party that Pam had and Eric had stayed for. Poor Eric though he did seem hurt that Jackie didn’t remember. Wonder how long it’ll take her to realize that the tie was Eric’s and what she’ll do then.
Great job on this chapter once again! I did so enjoy it! Can’t wait to read more! Till then keep up the wonderful work!
| Marla's Lost 2/22/13 . chapter 5
But she couldn't deal with a conversation about his sexual needs right now, when they were alone in this big house and he was looking so handsome even when he wasn't trying at all.****Oh Jackie...you're lonely too!
She picked up the tie and smoothed her fingers over it. The green was fading a little but she felt like it was just yesterday she had tied his neck. His eyes had matched the tie so perfectly. She could almost hear the party noises and smell the scents of the flowers her mother had decorated the place with that long ago evening.****I don't remember the tie...was that from the "formal dinner" she wanted that went out of control and on fire?
Well, I'll just have to wait with baited breath for the next chapter!
| RevertedLogic 2/22/13 . chapter 5
I'm glad Eric becomes more social when with Jackie, and it's cute that Jackie thinks about Eric and 'that night'. Loved the tie thing, very funny :)
| cajunghost 2/22/13 . chapter 5
I'm glad that he finally opened up a little but to Jackie but I think she may have hurt his feelings when she said she didn't remember about what the tie represents. Nice chapter I really liked it.