Oh by the way, for your other story I don't thnk I was logged in when I reviewed so if you have a guest review most likely it's from me..:/

:) -She's a witch." Naboo said, in way of explanation.- oh naboo:) this made me smile;)
Also everythingabout the crunch. :)

Cool

-You were. You were in there, like a wolf. Or a cheetah. Rah.- I think this is my faverout line:)

Hehe I like that the howince is being written out as a separate story!:)
Also I like how for both stories you are starting from the beginning and actually creating a storyline;) nice
This is just as good as the other fic and as always I'm interested in what will happen next :)