Impressive, most impressive. I'm glad that I have rediscovered the story. Wonderful characterizations of Vader and Abheia and the others. Please tell me that there will be sequels.

What a wonderful story! I simply loved it, so beautifully written. I'd love to read more about Vader's archivist though...

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

Thanks, readers, for your feedback! I'm glad to know that you are all enjoying the tale. :)

The next chapter is in the works, and I was wondering if you would like a go-round between the Sith Lord who is apparently the boss of everything other than his own archives...

I also have a plot bunny with Moff Eirad and the adventures of the Imperials in the far-Outer Rim. Imperial patriarchy meets Oathkin gynocracy...

Hmmm... more plot bunnies with Sith history... Arien's story... goodness!

Powerful, the inner conflict of all three, Vader, Naum, and especially Abi, really shows the effect the Jedi Order had on them. Keep those chapters coming. :) 7

Hi Chaos, it's me again. Concerning new storys - well I'm an Vader-addicted if my favourite dark Lord is in it I'm basically happy. But Moff Eirad is also a wonderful character I would love to see more of him especially in teamwork with darth, also this archivist sounds very interesting. I'm also very curios about Abi's future training and her life in the empire and as a Sith. The Interaction with other characters especially the Emperor, Vader , Luke -when and if he shows up- and oh is Padme in your Univers still alive?
Wonderful new chapter by the way.

Hi, everyone! Thanks for reading and reviewing my tale. :)

I am thinking of other stories to tell in this little corner of the galaxy - there are so many directions available! Would you like to know more about the Oathkin? Or maybe Moff Eirad or Vader's "battleship of an Archivist?" Do you want to know more about Naum Koghan? How about Arien's future? Maybe Abhaia's past or her probable future?

I deeply value the feedback of my readers!

Excellent!

Wahooooo!!! A new wonderful chapter , yeah!
Come on chaos, make on old man happy and write more!! What about an update - uh let's every 30 minutes? (Yes you guessed rigth, I'm in a generous mood today)Are there any plans for an sequel - assuming this story is nearing its ending.

Hi chaos, I just wanted to tell you that this fiction is my current top favourit!!!
I had an eye on it for some time now - here and at the force.net - and I have seldom
before encountered an fiction with such an wonderfull characterisation and superb diction!
Congratulation !! I eagerly await the next update! (Sorry for possible mistakes in
grammer or writing English is not my native tongue)

Stunningly good, definitely a must-read in my book.

Wow.. this is a very emotional story, it sounds like it'll be a great one! Awesome potential! Keep writing, I'll be sure to read and review again!!

Poignant and richly drawn, this is a beautiful story. Sadness haunts every sentence like frosty breah against a window (I'm being very poetic for some reason) and the story is captivating.