| Reviews for Fusion Fall - Can I lose a Real Friend? |
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lightning bird 1/1/13 . chapter 6Ben's instincts are better than most people give him credit for and usually spot on (or close to). It'll be interesting to see where this leads. |
lightning bird 1/1/13 . chapter 5I like how Dexter put that little 'for now' disclaimer on to his statement that things were okay. Did anyone notice? |
Alice Gone Madd 12/14/12 . chapter 5very good I know about INSPIRATION it is a pain. heres a tip listen to music and picture your self in the story and see what it needs :) hope this helps |
Guest 12/5/12 . chapter 1 Freakin' Awsome so far! Honestly enjoying the story quite alot! Can't wait to read what happens next! |
Guest 12/2/12 . chapter 2 A very intriguing beginning to your story. You've got the making of a lot of action and drama. Keep it up! And no, I don't mind if you romp about in my universe! |
lightning bird 12/4/12 . chapter 4A very nice display of friendship so far! I'm enjoying this story thoroughly, and I greatly appreciate the regular updates, too! |
lightning bird 12/3/12 . chapter 3Oh, my, what a lovely development! |
lightning bird 12/2/12 . chapter 2Hmm. It seems I wasn't signed in for that initial review. Oh, well. As I said, feel free to play in my sandbox. I like that you've established an easy-going friendship between Ben and Dexter. Ben getting ill before Dexter's eyes would probably distress the Boy Genius thoroughly. It will be enjoyable to see where you take this. |