|Reviews for Admiral, Father, Dad|
| DarkDevon13 5/19/13 . chapter 1
This was a nice fic
| Loves to read books 4/20/13 . chapter 1
| Moonlitfaith 12/1/12 . chapter 1
Nicely done. A nice different take on Tom and Admiral Paris' backstory in contrast to some of the obviously "don't like tight spaces" stories.
Very believable and touching. Thanks for sharing.
| bina W 11/25/12 . chapter 1
This was good. I wish there were more stories out there that had Owen Paris. Do you know of any more? I also plan on reading your story on how Kathryn and Tom kept their professional (and private) relationship after "30 Days." I will give you feeback on that as chance you would hbe willingto write a longer story that ha Paris and Tom in it?
| Juddysbuddy 11/19/12 . chapter 1
This was great! Loved the P/T stuff, of course. Loved the
way you wove the stuff about his Dad, Father, Admiral in
with it. That part about his dad giving him a padd after
Tom's "First Time" was something I'd never heard of before.
Thank you again for a great story!
| Rusty Raccoon 11/18/12 . chapter 1
A nice, enjoyable read that shows decent insight into both characters. I think you did a very good job in making sense of the differences in Owen Paris' character that people have mentioned in a way that I think is believable.
| Alpha Flyer 11/17/12 . chapter 1
"To … my Dad, it's nice to know he's still there."
Very nice take on the evolution of that line.
Also loved the P/T bits, the understanding and consideration they have developed for one another, the private space they have carved out for themselves. We occasionally got glimpses of that in the series, and I always love seeing it explored.
| phalangescankillwithapaperclip 11/17/12 . chapter 1
| ForensAnthro 11/16/12 . chapter 1
I always wondered about the discrepancies in Admiral Paris' character! I think you tidied things up really nicely, and I really like the P/Tness:)