|Reviews for Friendly Fire Incident|
| db1019 5/23/13 . chapter 13
Another Excellent Chapter to this story. You do a great job of building tension and anticipation! Can't wait to hear how they handle St. Claire. Ready for more!
| steamboat 5/20/13 . chapter 13
Nice to see this wonderful story continues! I am infinitely more grateful that you and yours were not adversely affected by the events of the Marathon terrorists! In remembrance of those who were...
| Ciara 5/20/13 . chapter 13
Thank you for updating, I like your story and look forward to reading whatever chapters you can get to us!
| flaunt 5/20/13 . chapter 13
Finally, and man this was worth the wait. (please don't take this as an endorsement to continually make us wait though). :D
You're setting up some interesting dynamics here, and what promises to be a doozy of a battle vs. the SF guys. Can't wait to see how the JAGs take on and slay the proverbial beast.
I chuckled aloud (I guess that counts as a LOL) at the Marine Anatomy line.
On a side note, hope things clear up on the home front soon and you can return to writing more often.
| byrhthelm 5/19/13 . chapter 13
Dayum! I wanted to be a fly on the (canvas) wall already! Now I get to wait some more? Dayum! I say again, dayum!
Good to see that Harm isn't he only one who operates mouth before engaging brain. What was Mac thinking? In the middle of a case briefing, what was she doing even thinking about Harm's love life and their convoluted relationship?
And I wonder, since she did go down that path, if the words: pot, kettle, black ever sprung to her mind. But I doubt it, as always she's in the middle of a certain African river.
| TnJAGAz 5/9/13 . chapter 1
All right - great start - it may take me a bit to get up to 13, but I will do my best. Color me impressed. :)
| flaunt 5/6/13 . chapter 12
Cool. Cool cool cool. I'm intrigued by the prospect of: Four lawyers v. the World. (coming this fall).
I re-read this from the start - and I can't wait to see Harm and Mac prove why the Navy & Marine Corps pay them the 'fair-to-medium sized' bucks. And it's really cool that the JAG lawyers actually have a conscience, actually care about the parties involved in the cases (even if they don't seem to show it at first) - and aren't just out to clear their case load. A case like this - it's easy to find a scapegoat (due to the need to 'beat the media' to the verdict) and then let the truth fall through the cracks until 20 years later.
Glad that H&M are being good influences to all parties involved in the case - by using their communication skills to make everyone else reveal their thoughts, feelings and motivations. Now if they could only communicate like that with each other, maybe we'd all live happier!
Can't wait for chapter 13.
| db1019 4/29/13 . chapter 12
Just came across this story - VERY interesting. I'm new to Fanfic (wish I'd found it long ago!) and I love when the 'military' storyline is upheld, especially with Harm. Hope to see more of this story soon!
| Michi uk 4/14/13 . chapter 12
I've enjoyed the banter between them all, as they strive to get to the bottom of this case, someone is certainly trying to withhold evidence, can't wait to find out. Please finish this intrigueing story.
| steamboat 4/13/13 . chapter 12
The dream team has come to a consensus. Something's fishy and the smell is coming from the Special Forces camp! Good story!
| byrhthelm 4/13/13 . chapter 12
You can't hide from the truth, but can you handle it?
So what do we have, if the SF did open fire on the extraction team? A case of mistaken ID at night? or something more sinister?
What is St Claire hiding, i get the feeling there is more to his attitude than traditional SF 'classified' and 'need to know' BS, what's he up to? Drug smuggling? Arms dealing? Aid and comfort to the enemy? The opportunities abound in SF activities.
| Michi uk 3/9/13 . chapter 11
Another excellent informative chapter. can't wait for the update ASAP!
| steamboat 3/8/13 . chapter 11
great story! I love the attitude adjustment that Harm gave to that pompous ass Stallworth!
keep up the good work!
| byrhthelm 3/8/13 . chapter 11
Excellent, tense, nail-biting stuff. Thank you!
| ScribeAnimal 2/27/13 . chapter 3
Absolutely terrific story. ArmyDT42. My own late father-in-law was an Army Vet of WWII in Burma (yes, he was elderly, now deceased) so I have a soft spot for the US Army. Thank you for your service. I look forward to reading more of this story. It's military action is absolutely mesmerising.