|Reviews for Mercurial|
| gymnast1454 5/17/13 . chapter 22
Awwww! I love your story! the tension is so great! you should still not put them together. I think you should have her have the baby and they keep it and then they raise it toghter but there are those wonderfully awkward moments where they are close but still not together. like shareing a bed and it being slightly uncomfortable. But Im sure whatever you do/did/have planned will be wonderful.
| KaiaBlackrock 5/16/13 . chapter 22
I don't have a problem with Gibbs being the one who got through to Ziva. He couldn't stay silent any longer, he's got two kids to watch out for. He let Ziva spin her wheels and try to figure it out, but she wasn't getting anywhere, so he had to voice his opinion at some point. She could've still decided to give the baby away if that's what she'd really wanted, he didn't force her hand, but Gibbs would've let Tony down if he never said anything.
| cherrycafpow 5/16/13 . chapter 22
Aww I love the way you've concluded this. Please tell me there's more though, I really don't want this story to end :( please update soon if you're planning to :)
| NCIS Ziva DiNozzo 5/15/13 . chapter 22
Aww I loved the Gibbs and Ziva moment! 3 Update soon I'm ready for them to have this baby! :)
| Courtzylovesit 5/15/13 . chapter 22
I absolutely love it! I can't wait to read Tonys reaction! I understand why you chose Gibbs to change her mind because I believe he is one who would at anytime! I hope (playfully) they fight over holding the little girl and end up snuggled together on the bed with their newborn- funny story I birthed a baby only a month ago and the parents were young and undecided and as soon as the little boy was on the young girls chest, the father was curled against them both and they all cuddled together for hours! He was the best support and encourager there could have been!
Can't wait for the next one! And love that this one was soo quick :-)
| firstadream100 5/15/13 . chapter 22
I liked that it was Gibbs who got through to Ziva. He's the only one who has been a parent and he also has been witness of all the things that Tony and Ziva have overcome.
| AgentD.6 5/15/13 . chapter 22
I thought it was ok for Gibbs to have the talk with Ziva but I still think those hurtful actions will be hard for Tony to work thru over time.
| BuzyBee223 5/15/13 . chapter 22
I LOVE IT! MORE PLEASE!
| ChristelJo 5/15/13 . chapter 22
Now, this is exactly what I was hoping for. I really was hoping to see Gibbs finally get through to Ziva, and Ziva and Tony would be able to raise their child. You're doing such a fantastic job on this book. Definitely one of my favs! :)
| conservativegirl 5/15/13 . chapter 22
Great chapter! I'm so glad they're keeping her! Awesome chapter :)
| rosemarieheathwaybelikov 5/15/13 . chapter 22
I absolutely love this chapter. I am so glad about resolution. You couldn't have done it better. It is absolutely amazing. Will there be more chapters, some TIVA stuff? The way they try to be parents to little baby girl? I want to know her name! Oh, and I can't wait to read Tony's thoughts now that she decided to keep the baby. Will there be a squel?
| nessaja 5/15/13 . chapter 22
i like the story and this chapter really much. hope you update soon.
| kw 5/15/13 . chapter 22
I love that you used Gibbs as an epiphany for Ziva; great chapter, using very few words in their actual dialogue. "Sometimes, less is more."
| Katherine41319 5/15/13 . chapter 22
It was a great decision having Gibbs talk to Ziva, like a father/daughter conversation. She's going to keep it! Yay! I can't wait for the baby!
| Guest 5/15/13 . chapter 22
i love your resolution. It really shows Gibbs care and paternal love for both Tony and Ziva