Please continue the series, it is fascinating the way you have Sherlock engaging with her. He seems much .ore willing to join in than usual. Thank you.

Father trained her as a faux clairvoyant? Sounds a bit too close to Patrick Jane to me, but at least the backstory isn't identical, only the same at the trunk; Branches of their lives are much more separated. I commend you. Plus, the deduction on the electroshock was spot-on.
PS, serial cheat because of the ring? I hope i'm not the only one to catch it. But don't worry, it's a good thing; it means you know you're a proper Sherlockian.

I like the story.

I can't wait to read more!

Please update soon?!

Yay! Please more chapters! I'm starting to like this story.

I'm intrigued as where you will take this. Great work so far, keep going

Was tht supposed to come out creepy? It did a bit. He should address her feeling that things are odd directly. It can be direct enough to be awkward.

Fabulous! You should definitely continue this as a series. I would also love it if there were some back story on how Watson & Sherlock got together (the romantic in me wants details lol). The relationship with the girl is very intriguing and I want more!

this is so good! please update!

I REALLY like this, and i want to see more! More I say!

And in MY not so humble opinion, I think eventually, if you hadn't already planned for it, she should have a mother/daughter relationship with Joan, and a father/daughter relationship with Sherlock, but not in the usual way. He isn't a normal friend, so I doubt he'd be a normal father.

He'd probably never display his affections outloud, but little thing here and there, like a pat on the shoulder, messing up her hair, or telling someone who doubted her abilities, "Told you so!" when she displayed them would probably suffice.

And since she already trusts him, the next step is to probably respect him, probably after she tells them all she can about a victim, and he had decifered one or two more facts than her. If you're going for a female version of Sherlock here, she might say, "I can't belive I missed that..."

He'd probably respond, "Well, now you know what to look for."

You're the writer, not me, I'm just having fun with this.

All the police force she ever encounters, victims or suspects she questions, will probably ALL make jabs at her age, because I'm guessing she' like, fifteen, sixteen? Seventeen would probably be pushing it.

And hey, what does she look like? I don't think you described her, like, hair style/color, eye color, etc.

Please continue this!

Ok, bravo! A nice AU, with Watson being the girlfriend and now another set of eyes. Well done. Nicely done. You softened Holmes, but for the story well played. Now can you continue with this? This would be a great long story.

Rate: A

I liked this.

That could make a really good story someday. If you make it into a story, PM me about it. I would like to read it.

Wow! This was great. I wasn't sure how the original character was going to be, but you managed to make her fascinating and I definitely want to know more!

Update soon!