A great story
Worth reading
Extreme good plot
Something to appreciate
On for the best
Master piece
Everyone should read

Read the first letters of each sentece. :D

-CrazyJ888

Thanks for finishing. I like the story as a whole and look forward to the next.

I liked it, I did not expect the Twitchtip bonding. Ending with him getting rid of the journal was great.

If you would please write a chapter i would be forever in your debt because this was the best book i have read so far and i hate cliff hangers because Susan Collins left the last book on a cliff hanger and everyone got really mad at her so don't make me get made at you for the same reason.

Awesome book so far, but work on your punctuation.

Please finish

Ready for the wedding

There's going to be a sequel? Well, this review is for all the chapters. I think this could be more well written, but good plot!

Aight, lets go. It's funny how things can change. Good chapter! Can you make graphic sex scene between Gregor and Luxa?

Great job some people are just unbelievable. I look forward to the finish

amazing chapter nothing else to say

Don't get me wrong, i love the idea, but you seriously need an editor. I love the story, but the grammatical mistakes somewhat detract from the overall story.

Almost to the happy ending. I do not understand why Luxa even lets this council stay around. I am pretty sure none of those people were there so to say Gregor just let Ares die angers me, they couldn't pry his had form Ares' claw. Good job you made me hate the council..I love that the people voted nothing better than the people's champion.

This was good, I love Gregor asking for permission to marry Luxa. Hopefully everyone comes to help him, he has earned it at this point killing the Bane and the ant Queen. Hope that hearing thing works itself out.

This was a good chapter...now the real battle begins. Not even sure why there is still this annoying counsel she should have got first thing when she became queen. No matter they better be careful Luxa is just stubborn enough to walk away with Gregor and let Brad be king.