Amazing job!

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Nice ending :) It seemed a little rushed but I still liked the twist of his sister being bullied. It's really hard to finish off stories, so kudos to you.

Yay a happy ending! Fantastic stuff, I absolutely love this fic and you've done extremely well!

I actually really enjoy this story. And I totally understand the writer's block, I get it all the time when trying to write. But I'd love to read more of this story.

I'm nearly in tears. This is such an emotional chapter, I can just imagine how Leighton is feeling. He just lost the love of his life and doesn't know what to do because he's torn apart by the event. I've got to hold it together, I'm nearly crying, great chapter!

Wonderful job! I'm very excited that Opal and Leighton still have feelings for each other. I think that Opal's changed a lot since the last three in a half years.

Aww how cute. Another terrific chapter.

There is no excuse for a place to get that dirty. Another fine chapter.

This is really, really cute. And I agree with your portrayal of Jared Frio. He's a jerk.

I love this. I had my sim marry Leighton, and Erin Kennedy kept asking him out. Like, daily. It was creepy. But I think it's great that you're writing about the Sekemotos. A.

Plumbob Simpants? Nice.

Nicely done, I think there could have been more detail but all around it was good and dang, Leighton just barges in there and tells her to clean up, I would have been like, this is my house lol, but I guess since their son has been there a lot he feels protective of him. Can't wait to read more :)

Oh dear thay didn't go well. Anorhe great chapter!

Wonderful job, that was really a shock finding out that Opal kind of had a family of her own. I hope Sam is able to cope with it.