cliche's EVERYWHERE

This is a terrible story. It's generic, stupid and badly written. I was embarrassed just reading it. It wasn't creative at all. The whole backwards text on the letter thing was one of the least creative ideas you had in this entire story. Okay, maybe I'm being a little harsh. I'm sorry about that. I think that maybe this story needs a little more thought into the way that it's trying to be scary.

So far it just seems like it's another story trying to be like the Ben drowned story.

*gasp* What happens next?!

Woah... I like this story. I highly encourage you to update! :D

awsome