|Reviews for A Wheezer's Demise|
| Taylor1103 4/18/13 . chapter 1
I loved it! Escape From Furnace is my favorite series. You did a great job with this and I felt like I was reading the books again (now I actually want to re-read them!) Keep writing, I'd love to read more.
| KajitheMango 4/13/13 . chapter 1
I love it! :)
| TheNugget 3/13/13 . chapter 1
I love how descriptive you are...it almost felt like I was reading the book again! This is a great Fic, especially for something as unique as Lockdown (: Loved it!
| Edhla 12/1/12 . chapter 1
Disclaimer: haven't read the book, sorry :o
That said, this is a cracking fic, especially since it's your first! One hell of a title, that draws you in, and you make nice use of some great imagery and good action.
There were a couple of minor spelling and grammar issues, which I'm happy to send to you if you want them, and I definitely think you could expand this, make it longer and more detailed, bring out your characters more. But really, you've done a good job :)