I loved it! Escape From Furnace is my favorite series. You did a great job with this and I felt like I was reading the books again (now I actually want to re-read them!) Keep writing, I'd love to read more.

I love it! :)

I love how descriptive you are...it almost felt like I was reading the book again! This is a great Fic, especially for something as unique as Lockdown (: Loved it!

Disclaimer: haven't read the book, sorry :o

That said, this is a cracking fic, especially since it's your first! One hell of a title, that draws you in, and you make nice use of some great imagery and good action.

There were a couple of minor spelling and grammar issues, which I'm happy to send to you if you want them, and I definitely think you could expand this, make it longer and more detailed, bring out your characters more. But really, you've done a good job :)